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Reviews For On the Other Side
Can you please tell me if you are planning to finish it? I hope you do!
Really love the plot line, very developed! I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story!
Author's Response: I like the word "snapey". It definitely should be found in the dictionary. Thanks for reviewing!
Good chappie. Glad that you've updated and I can't wait for the next. Author's Response: Yes, it's hard for him at the moment. I'm glad you liked the chapter, I was afraid readers might find it slightly boring. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback! You are right: if Harry continues to see the houses as "natural enemies", he's going to have to face one moral dilemma after the other...
I think it's going to have to be up to Severus to get a clue as poor old Harry seems to be swimming against the tide with the Slytherins. Perhaps Severus will decide it's time for a home visit ... ;) Great stuff, still really enjoying the story. Author's Response: I'm glad you're still enjoying it. You're right, Harry's having a hard time at the moment, we'll see if it will get better... Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback! Trying to make the characters believable is very important to me, so I'm glad you think I succeeded...
Author's Response: Well I'll try, unfortunately I'm a slow writer... Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm especially happy you think I build up tension, because somehow with every chapter I write I fear it might be boring... |
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