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Title: Caught! 25 Apr 2010 3:44 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter. Very well done! Harry really did deserve to get in trouble, but not get beaten up. Good thing that Prefect was there. I wonder if he will be a reoccurring character? Everyone is very much in character. I wonder what punishment Harry will face for his bad judgment. Thanks for the update!

    Author's Response: Yes, without the prefect it would have been very unpleasant indeed... and yes, you will meet him again in the story, though he will not become a main character. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: The Plan 25 Apr 2010 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, Ron IS brilliant, but Hermione is right. Harry is on a suicide mission!


    Nice beginning. I can't wait to see where this is going.

    Author's Response: Glad you like it!
Title: Caught! 25 Apr 2010 1:05 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh oh! Harry is done for this time. Yikes.

    I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Harry though. He got so beaten up. Malfoy is such a bully, and so is Flint. Isn't Flint quite a bit older too than Harry and definitely bigger.

    Ooh, I can't wait for the next chapter. Nice job at keeping everyone in character too.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I am happy that you think I kept everyone in character. I always try to do it - and I always worry if I have succeeded...
Title: Caught! 25 Apr 2010 12:17 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oooh this seems like it will be a good story, cant wait to see what Dumbledore will say about it and what he will allow Snape to do to Harry! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks for your feedback, I am glad you like the story!
Title: Caught! 24 Apr 2010 11:23 pm
Reviewer: Ichihime (Signed) [Report This]
    Hm, when were they told to not go into the common room of another house? There's the passwords of course, but what's the reason behind it? It would make more sense if the houses were divided by ages instead of personalities. What does siblings do when they want to visit each other? Or friends? Hogwarts is really encouraging the rivalry between the houses and discouraging having friends from other houses.
    How does this lead to resorting?
    I'm very much looking forward to more.

    Author's Response:

    I agree that Hogwarts really encourages the rivalry between houses. Inter-house friendships are definitely not encouraged. After all, in the second book when Harry and Ron wanted to go into the Slytherin common room they didn't even know where it was!

    As to how this leads to resorting, you are going to find out in the next chapter! Thanks for reviewing!

Title: The Plan 22 Apr 2010 11:14 pm
Reviewer: HeartStar (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I like it I hope to see more soon!

    Author's Response: Don't worry, you will ;)
Title: The Plan 22 Apr 2010 8:11 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What a great beginning.... can't wait to read more!

    Author's Response: Glad you like it - I'll update soon.
Title: The Plan 22 Apr 2010 4:30 am
Reviewer: Vergnugen (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh how interesting. I do hope you update this soon. I can't wait to see what Harry hears from the little snakes. Well done.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I'm so glad you like it!
Title: The Plan 21 Apr 2010 9:18 pm
Reviewer: ivanoma (Anonymous) [Report This]
    you might shock the slytherins if Harry can open the common room door with parseltonge...why would salazar bother remembering different passwords if he could set himself up with a permanent one that supposedly only he could speak?

    Author's Response:

    Interesting idea, I hadn't thought of that. There would probably need to be some snake symbol carved in the wal, or Harry wouldn't be able to speak Parseltongue.

     

Title: The Plan 21 Apr 2010 9:05 pm
Reviewer: AchillesMonkey (Anonymous) [Report This]
    How interesting. I'm assuming he's going to get caught.

    Author's Response: I don't think I'm giving away too much if I say your assumption is correct. Where would the Snape-Harry interaction be otherwise...

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