Oh no, there’s some real darkness here.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 May 2010 10:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start with a lot of action thank you
Omg! Poor Harry.
I hope that Snape can protect him, because I dont' trust any of them.
Great start.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 May 2010 11:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Anon (Anonymous)
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"Lockhart" is spelled as so. The consistent changing that is a bit annoying.
I do like how this is playing out, tho.
Good job! I am looking foward to reading more. This is going on my update list! :-D I always knew that Lockheart was ugh. Great job!
Oh, you have me hooked!!!! More, more, more please! Severus is "going a little soft." As an outcase in his younger years he doesn't like bullies and he is seeing his young self in what Harry is going through. Poor Harry, he thought he only had to worry about "Harry Hunting" aorund his cousin. Harry is correct, between Snape and McGongalle he does have teacher help.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 04 May 2010 8:46 pm
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| Reviewer: S.S (Anonymous)
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brilliant story can't wait for more
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