Title: Chapter 3
| 15 Jun 2015 3:16 pm
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Reviewer: PharaohsLoyalMagician (Anonymous)
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Wonderful. I do hope you will update it soon. And I do hope they talk soon about everything. You're a brilliant author. Cheers and ta!:)
Title: Chapter 3
| 23 Feb 2015 4:07 am
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Reviewer: snarry fan (Anonymous)
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Title: Chapter 3
| 29 Dec 2014 5:57 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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this is going so well and i absolutely love it! please consider writing more chapters!!!
What! I love this story! *pleads to the empty space* Don't leave the story any longer than you already have!
Title: Chapter 3
| 16 Nov 2013 9:28 am
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Reviewer: Connie (Anonymous)
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PLEASE continue. I love this.
Title: Chapter 3
| 10 Oct 2013 6:21 pm
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Reviewer: ,00, (Anonymous)
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Good story; but; spell check.
Harry had: Scratches. Bruises.
Title: Chapter 3
| 24 Aug 2013 4:23 am
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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AWESOME! ME gusta....keep writing por favor!
This is AMAZING! Please continue, pleeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasse. *shudder* Lockheart is creeping me out...
this is very interesting. i can't wait to read more!
Lockhart is absolutely CHILLING!
I am dying to read the next chapter! I like your writing style and Snape acts - even for all his concern - rather in character. Harry crying does seem a little... odd though. But, it works.
My favorite scene though, right now, is Harry's reaction to Lockhart touching his face. Going to the bathroom, scrubbing himself, and retching... It just makes it that much worse, I guess.
Can't wait for the next one!
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