| Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping Dragon
| 16 Nov 2016 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent start
I wonder how Snape knows about the enchantments and charms that impede the students from jumping…I like how you wrote that.
Look who's being snarky!
Great start
| Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping Dragon
| 04 May 2010 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I read this last night while it was in the submission que.
I though that the story was brilliantly executed. I especially liked how you left out describing the details of Harry's past ordeal... too many stories in the past have gone through them all, but really the story does not NEED those details. In a way it subtracts from the story, but no one seemed capable of showing how it could be written. Until you came. Well done.
Thank you for this, and very well done. I wish that you had posted it one chapter a day, or every other day so that you would get more reviews and attention. This is a story that everyone should read because they need to realize that it can be done, and they need to see how you did it so they can adopt similar ideas.
I will review and rate the other chapters so that you have some.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I never thought about posting it day by day to increase readership. I'm always so bothered when I fall in love with a story and the author never finishes it, that I make a point to only post complete stories. But I will remember to space them out in the future. Thanks again for your efforts administering this site! It's lovely.
| Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping Dragon
| 04 May 2010 8:11 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awesome. Loved the last part. Does Snape know from experience?
That's it? I hope there's a sequel.
Author's Response: There are seven chapters, and I posted them all. The rest is probably waiting for verification before being released. Check back in a few hours :-)
Nice start, can't wait to read more.
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