| Title: Chapter 5: Phoenix Rising
| 16 Nov 2016 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter
Sneaky Snape! Definitely points for him!
| Title: Chapter 5: Phoenix Rising
| 05 May 2010 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fabulous emotions in the beginning of how Harry left his book, his wand and how he felt almost naked without them.
I was worried about Snape and how he was getting beat up, but I liked the cushioning charms. Yes, Harry must have been out of it if he didn't even notice Snape was okay. I felt a little disconnected from Harry though, and his emotions when he got angry. Not sure. Maybe it's because we switched to Snape? Perhaps we needed more thoughts and feelings from Snape to fill in the gaps. He seemed a little blank during it. It was difficult to connect with the characters during what was probably one of the most passionate scenes.
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