| Title: Chapter 2: In Disguise
| 16 Nov 2016 9:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping Dragon
| 16 Nov 2016 9:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent start
I like how you addressed this very serious topic, and how Snape was in character, and yet helped Harry. He wasn't overly emotional about it, which Harry really didn't need, but was very pragmatic. It was an enjoyable read. The ending is very sweet (in a Snape kind of way).
I wonder how Snape knows about the enchantments and charms that impede the students from jumping…I like how you wrote that.
Wonderful, uplifting story at the end. I like how Snape remained distinctly Snape throughout, and that little bit of rearrangement of the game at the end was a nice touch. Excellent handling of such a delicate, and difficult subject.
| Title: Chapter 7: Drawing To A Close
| 30 Oct 2012 2:32 am
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| Reviewer: FrancineMarie (Anonymous)
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Great ending! I was hoping for more but it makes sense that it would end here
Great chapter, I enjoyed it
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