| Title: Chapter 7: Drawing To A Close
| 22 Jul 2010 10:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Ray 22 (Anonymous)
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Love the story!
Especially when Snape started to provoke Harry In the Antechamber!
| Title: Chapter 7: Drawing To A Close
| 11 Jun 2010 8:00 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Love the ending, whole story is awesome, my favorite is that Snape seems so in character, which is rare to find (in my opinion) in fan fiction :D
| Title: Chapter 7: Drawing To A Close
| 05 Jun 2010 6:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Well, that was interesting enough. Snape, wonder for wonders, can help even while remaining a git. *snickers* He almost lost it last chapter though, showing a grin. For shame :P. Kudos on a well written story.
This was incredible! I don't understand how it cannot have more reviews. I absolutely loved it. And Snape was in character the entire time, which I loved :)
So very glad I forewent an early night for this fic ^^ - sad and angsty again but you're just so damn good at it ^^ Someday I'd love to see one of your fics taken so far that Sev and Harry realise how absolutely wonderful the other is and chocolate, cuddling and D&Ms ensue but *sigh* I'm starting to think the world doesnt work that way. I feel so disillusioned TT. WOnderful fic - have I said how amazing I think you are when it comes to detailed descriptions of emotion? Will have to read anything else you write in future ^^
Have fun ^^
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| Title: Chapter 7: Drawing To A Close
| 05 May 2010 1:17 am
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Very well written story =o)
| Title: Chapter 7: Drawing To A Close
| 05 May 2010 12:06 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I loved the letter.
The chapter and the story kind of seemed to end quickly. I would have liked a bit more closure, but I did really like the letter.
Really good job taking a difficult subject and making it workable.
I really, really hope that you will proliferate and write many, many more stories to post here. :)
| Title: Chapter 6: Aero Mobulus
| 05 May 2010 12:05 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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This is a very, very cool spell. I am curious as to Snape's teaching methods. Does he think that if a student thinks that they can and should be able to do something that they will be able to do it? Whereas being more cautious with praise will cause a student to fail? Or maybe he just expects so much from Harry? Or maybe he just dislikes Harry that much...
| Title: Chapter 5: Phoenix Rising
| 05 May 2010 12:04 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Fabulous emotions in the beginning of how Harry left his book, his wand and how he felt almost naked without them.
I was worried about Snape and how he was getting beat up, but I liked the cushioning charms. Yes, Harry must have been out of it if he didn't even notice Snape was okay. I felt a little disconnected from Harry though, and his emotions when he got angry. Not sure. Maybe it's because we switched to Snape? Perhaps we needed more thoughts and feelings from Snape to fill in the gaps. He seemed a little blank during it. It was difficult to connect with the characters during what was probably one of the most passionate scenes.
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