| Title: Chapter 4: Formidable Opponents
| 05 May 2010 12:01 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awww, I love how Snape is taking care of him, but in his own way. Good job keeping everyone in character.
| Title: Chapter 3: The Antechamber
| 05 May 2010 12:01 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I thought at first that Snape would be able to read Harry's book through his own book. Explaining the purpose of the book better would have cleared that up. I really loved the descriptions of the magic Harry felt, and his feelings toward this book. Well done.
| Title: Chapter 2: In Disguise
| 04 May 2010 11:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I put all of your letters, owl-post and such in blockquotes for you this morning. If you want to ever edit the story files, you will have to make sure the blockquotes are still in somehow or the letters will lose their special style and revert to plain styled text.
| Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping Dragon
| 04 May 2010 11:58 pm
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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I read this last night while it was in the submission que.
I though that the story was brilliantly executed. I especially liked how you left out describing the details of Harry's past ordeal... too many stories in the past have gone through them all, but really the story does not NEED those details. In a way it subtracts from the story, but no one seemed capable of showing how it could be written. Until you came. Well done.
Thank you for this, and very well done. I wish that you had posted it one chapter a day, or every other day so that you would get more reviews and attention. This is a story that everyone should read because they need to realize that it can be done, and they need to see how you did it so they can adopt similar ideas.
I will review and rate the other chapters so that you have some.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. I never thought about posting it day by day to increase readership. I'm always so bothered when I fall in love with a story and the author never finishes it, that I make a point to only post complete stories. But I will remember to space them out in the future. Thanks again for your efforts administering this site! It's lovely.
Wonderful story. I so enjoyed it. Severus has taken basically a broken Harry and made him into the young man he was always meant to be. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 1: Sleeping Dragon
| 04 May 2010 8:11 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Awesome. Loved the last part. Does Snape know from experience?
That's it? I hope there's a sequel.
Author's Response: There are seven chapters, and I posted them all. The rest is probably waiting for verification before being released. Check back in a few hours :-)
Nice start, can't wait to read more.
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