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Reviews For Wings of an Angel
I don't have words to describe how touching some of the scenes were! I cried at lily's words before she passed away... It was a truly incredible read! Good job!!
i love the ending by the way! great job!
Almost made me cry in fact, especially when young Lily said her Goodbye's. It must have been really devastating for both Sev and Harry losing Lily and her namesake altogether. I just thought Harry might have reveal the secret to Sev when ALbus Severus is born. In that way he might be receptive. Maybe. Yet the original story is just fine. I'm also really glad you did not kill Sev in this story. I almost thought you would. hehe.. Keep writing!! :)
Your Snape is spot on, so is your Harry. 13 years! That is what would have happened, they both are so stubborn. I found the whole immune dysfunction/ sickness, and then coma stuff really well done, so well done that it was difficult to read. I have spoken to my own boy in a coma, for weeks, with no reaction, everyone being there, like in your story (grandparents and all). I've seen children who had degenerative disease and we seemed to have been the only lucky ones in the whole ICU who had our child coming back to us (though it can take months to wake from a coma, but then, my boy is no wizard ;) ) ramble ramble Anyway... well done, it was gorgeous.
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