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Reviews For Wings of an Angel
Almost made me cry in fact, especially when young Lily said her Goodbye's. It must have been really devastating for both Sev and Harry losing Lily and her namesake altogether. I just thought Harry might have reveal the secret to Sev when ALbus Severus is born. In that way he might be receptive. Maybe. Yet the original story is just fine. I'm also really glad you did not kill Sev in this story. I almost thought you would. hehe.. Keep writing!! :)
Your Snape is spot on, so is your Harry. 13 years! That is what would have happened, they both are so stubborn. I found the whole immune dysfunction/ sickness, and then coma stuff really well done, so well done that it was difficult to read. I have spoken to my own boy in a coma, for weeks, with no reaction, everyone being there, like in your story (grandparents and all). I've seen children who had degenerative disease and we seemed to have been the only lucky ones in the whole ICU who had our child coming back to us (though it can take months to wake from a coma, but then, my boy is no wizard ;) ) ramble ramble Anyway... well done, it was gorgeous.
I don't think your Ginny is very IC in this chapter but that's prolly because I actually liked her in this story as Harry's girl and that is rare for me.
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You can have Snape that he felt a hint of that pain before, when he tried to take his own life and realized he would be seeing Lily and Lily, but also leaving Harry. Author's Response: I added a line to the letter at the end, "This is the letter I had started, but not finished, after everything that happened with young Lily. Now you know." I hope this makes it clear? If not, I'll keep tweaking it. Thanks for your feedback!
I wonder what Snape means in his letter about leaving Harry. Does he mean that he is getting older and dying? Fabulous story. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it with us. And for posting it here on this site. :)
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