I think this was very belivable, not rushed at all. I think if Severus took any longer to try to figure it out, he'd be too dumb to resemble the canon Severus... Haha. Very nice chapter, please, please update again soon, as I really enjoy your story!
Author's Response: Haha true, Severus is quite the intelligent man xD Thanks for reviewing ^^ I'll try and update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 6
| 02 Jan 2011 11:09 pm
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| Reviewer: crayzgrl (Anonymous)
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This story is absolutely brilliant!! Please continue, I am officially hooked.:D
Author's Response: Thank you very much ^.^ I'm glad you're enjoying, and I'll try and update as soon as I can :)
well, im unsure about how to put my thoughts about this story into words....perhaps just...PLEASE UPDATE RAPIDLY, i wanna see how will this wonderful peace of writing go ON :)
Author's Response: Aww thanks :) I'll try and update soon ^^
Ahh, please update soon! Are they going to end up in Harry's memories at some point?
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :) Well, since this challenge calls for the pair going into Snape's memories, they're not going to be having the same experience with Harry. However, they will see the similarities they have and learn more about Harry's past. I'll try and update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 6
| 29 Dec 2010 6:51 am
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| Reviewer: kanzenhoshi (Anonymous)
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I love it. I don't feel that its rushed, good pacing actually. Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :) I'll try and update soon :D
I thought this chapter flowed very well. It did not feel rushed, emotionally, or otherwise. I am very eager to read what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :) I'm glad you like the pacing, because that's something I've really wanted to keep consistent. I'll try and update soon :D
I loved this chapter, even though it was short. I like how Snape is finally starting to suspect something... I wonder what the shouting is. Snape's dad? thanks for the update!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you ^_^ I know this was pretty short, but hopefully the next chapter will be longer. I'll try and update soon :D
Gahhh!!! Don't leave this till forever please. You hooked me from Chapter 1. Kudos!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review ^^ I'll try and update as soon as I can, because I know I'm a slow updater. I'm glad you like it :)
Oooh, this is so good!!! Please update again soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'll try and update soon ^^
Ahh! I hate cliffhangers! My only advice would be to make the chapters longer :)
Author's Response: Haha yes, that cliffie was rather evil of me xD I know this was pretty short, but hopefully the next one will be longer. Thanks for reviewing ^.^
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