I liked this little "filler" story, and though I was waiting for something more breathtaking than Harry No.2 appearing from the future to tell Harry No.1 that he has to come back for the book, the ending - Snape's actions, to be more exact - more than made up for the lack of action! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, this was written as drama, rather than action/adventure! And you would not believe how much I worked on the Snape scene to get it "just right" in the end! I absolutely loved Harry being able to put one over on Snape without really doing a thing in the present! By the way, while "Hidden" was still fresh in my mind, I went ahead and rewrote the Room scene from future-Harry's perspective-- if I EVER get my multi-chaptered story finished, the scene should show up there! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :-)
Fantastic! Brilliant writing!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the story, and many thanks for letting me know!
Very interesting premise, well executed. Poor old Severus- he's right but he'll never know just how right he was
Author's Response: Never say "never"-- if I can get my multi-chaptered story finished (I began writing it a couple of years ago), we'll see what happens... (hee!). Thanks for reading and especially for taking the time to review!
That was a wonderful story. Great job Shadow!
Author's Response: Thanks, autumn! I got such a kick out of writing this! Glad you enjoyed it!
The line with the "Boy-Who-Should-Have-Been-In-Bed"...made me laugh because I actually could see that part. I must say I am rather intrigued about the mysteries you've left us. I especially loved the suspense you created with Harry thinking it was Malfoy. Great job.
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to say so! I really enjoyed writing this, and I do hope to address the "mysteries" in another story in the future-- something to look forward to!
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