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Author's Response: There's a reason why Aurora's not going after him, which I will give soon. Excellent question about Scrimgeour. You should get that answered soon. Thanks for the review. :)
A little too soap opera-ish - her running away from a school dance after kissing him ( they are both teachers ) but well, fun!! Anyway, the rest of the school aren't really having to do much to set them up - they are already there. Author's Response: I'm sorry you didn't like my versions of them, but thank you for taking the time to read it, though. I was kind of going for the whole Cinderella aspect, but you're right. It came off like a bad soap opera. I had that silly idea of Cinderella and decided to try it here. They're not quite there yet, though. They're close, but not quite yet. Sinistra's still with that Auror. Plus, the rest of the school doesn't know that they're pretty close. Either way, thank you so much for telling me your thoughts, and thank you for reading it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I should have it updated on Saturday, possibly tomorrow if we're lucky. :) Glad you're enjoying it. |
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