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Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you love it. :)
Author's Response: I'll try to write more/update tomorrow. The update should concern the Slytherins joining in, but who knows? I might have a sudden spur of energy and write a ton tomorrow. :) I'm glad you're still enjoying it, Lia. Thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Yep. I can't wait until I write the revelation chapter. It's definitely going to be interesting to see how Snape and Sinistra react. Thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm glad you're enjoying it. :)
Before I start on this chapter's review , let me clear the air on my last review : I know u wrote Harry's essay that way - it was meant to be how students that age write - which is why I said that I am glad not to be in Snape's position/a teacher. Also, my comment about Sinistra meant - that I had this idea that the students are going to try and get them paired up for months, their plans getting foiled all the time till one fine day when it works. And just when they started taking credit for it all, it would be announced that Snape & Sinistra had been engaged all along and that they had been actually keeping it secret only to avoid all the gossip amongst students and a war coming up and that they had a lot of fun playing with the students these past few months... they wd detail how they foiled their plans. Well, that was an idea that just came up in my mind when I read that no one knew who Sinistra is engaged to but this chapter pretty much ruled that out. Sigh!!! Nevermind. I am sure that u have got some great ideas and I am looking forward to read them. Author's Response: It is a really good idea, Lia. I had thought about heading in that direction of having Snape and Sinistra secretly engaged, but decided against it. I usually have them secretly together so I thought I should spice things up with this story. I wasn't upset when I responded with your last review. So very sorry if I came off that way. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Again, sorry for the miscommunication. Thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: I'm going to try to keep it full of humor, but one of these days my lifetime supply of humor muse is unfortunately going to leave. :) I thought people would enjoy Dumbledore's disguise. I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for the review. :)
Also, I am surprised that Snape did not take the essay personally and get mad at Harry. Author's Response: I made sure that his essay was written that badly to show that Snape was focusing more on the topic than its grammar. I'm sure the essay was rather colorful once Snape finished correcting it, though. :) I just didn't add that part in the chapter in the interest of time and space. The essay is typical of a young man Harry's age, though, at least that is what I have received from my students when I have them write essays. My thinking of why Snape's not taking it personally was that he did give Harry the topic of love potions. So in a way, it is his fault that Harry took it in a totally different way. Snape probably was also rather impressed with how detailed and throughly researched Harry's essay was. At least that's my thinking of that.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, Lia. I'm not quite sure what you're meaning with the phrase concerning Sinistra. I'm probably misreading it, but are you asking if I should keep her engaged with whom I have her with or that she should become engaged to Snape? Either way, thanks for the review. :)
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it. He definitely doesn't stand a chance in phase 2. :) |
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