This story is brilliant. I loved that dialogue.
I liked the conversation between Harry and Snape at the end. It's given Harry something to think about.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 15 Feb 2014 7:29 pm
|
| Reviewer: hp (Anonymous)
| [Report This]
|
This is moving along at a very nice pace. I wonder how long it will take Harry and Snape to realise that Snape is doing a pretty good job of being the listening adult already, and much as I hate to say it, it looks as though Hermione is right.
Oh, I'm so glad to find this story! I loved the original drabble series so much, and this one is shaping up to be even better. :-)
This chapter is more than okay; it's terrific! I look forward to what happens next!
Well done!
I'm really enjoying this.
Don't doubt your ability. The story is interesting and flows well.
Hope you can update soon.
Aw you should feel confident! It was a really sweet chapter! Please update when you can :)
| Title: Chapter 6
| 11 Jul 2012 10:37 pm
|
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
| [Report This]
|
Please feel confident that was a lovely chapter! I love how they are not rushing to become friendly but gradually moving together. Thank you
If Harry gets hurt but doesn't have the flu playing "snow" quiditch maybe Snape could look after him again. That way they would have time to talk about Harry's memory/dreams.
Don't worry at all. I really enjoyed reading this and I'm glad to hear that Harry and Severus are getting along much better now. I really can't wait to read more. Please update again soon!
|