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Title: Brats and Bats 01 Jun 2010 8:59 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am glad harry is with sev, please let the dursleys get theres. Can't wait to read more. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: Thank u very much. Yeah, I'm waiting for the Durlseys to get theirs back too. Next chap in a few days, then!
Title: Brats and Bats 01 Jun 2010 8:40 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    wow, now it looks like a poem. Are you using wordpad or notepad or something? I hate those, they never format right

    Author's Response: Yes, I am using notepad bcoz HTML script takes a hell lot of time. And also it is my first time thta I submitted stories newhere. And I c that u surf this story pretty often! And I'm a bit new to all this, as I have just sai. Read my bio, will u?? 
Title: Brats and Bats 31 May 2010 7:15 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    This is one of my pet peeves when it comes to fanfiction. Doing this makes it look like you don't really care. When people see this kind of work, they assume that the author has not put time/effort into it, that it's not very good and avoid reading the story at all.

    It would help a lot if you formated it by adding spaces. It'll make it a lot easier to read and much more attractive to the audience

    You did better than me though, in some aspects. In my 1st fanfic, I had 3 grammar mistakes in the 1st 3 lines, and really silly mistakes too.

    Best of luck with your fic

    Author's Response: I have increased the spaces, as u will see when u open the text one more time.
Title: Brats and Bats 31 May 2010 6:01 am
Reviewer: Inu Chan (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Looks like I get to be the first reviewer!

    I liked the beginning of the story, especially where Severus and Albus were talking. I haven't read any other stories where Severus directly says those things, which I believe he must have been thinking.

    One small correction, in formatting: could you please put a blank line between each paragraph? The way you have it, in one large block of text, makes it very hard to read.

    Author's Response: I have increased the spaces as u pointed out, as u r going 2 see when u click it again.

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