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Reviews For Life's Best Laid Plans
First of all, this story is brilliant. It's unuasual to have a het. romance like this on potsandsnitches, but I really like the change. Little Harry is cute and Lucy is a true spitfire--not mary sue at all. I'm quite pleased. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm so glad to know you're enjoying my little story. I began it as a request from a reader of a Severitus of mine that his on hiatus. She wanted a romance for Severus. I wanted to see Harry have the childhood he was denied in canon...thus this story is the result. I can't tell you how much it means to me that people like Lucy. She is my first real OC and I've put in quite a lot of time and effort developing her. She is a product of her upbringing, something in which we will see in upcoming chapters. Harry...Well, Harry is six. It doesn't get much cuter than that. Thank you again. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story and I hope to hear from you again. ~Missyann
Author's Response: Just like it says, Kenneth is taking his time. There is no telling when or where he will make his move. Until then, Lucy is determined to lead a normal life...even if Severus is determined not to let her alone for a second. Thank you for the response. ~Missyann
Author's Response: Thank You.
So, Spinner's End gets a woman's touch. Cool. IS Kenneth really coming back? I hate him! I hope Sev and Siri kick his butt! Anyways, keep up the great work. Author's Response: I cried a little bit at that part too, and it wasn't my intention. Yep. Kenneth makes another appearance. Sorry. Thank you for your review. ~Missyann
I adore the bits of humour. Honestly, I loved how Sirius and Lucy banded together to take the mickey out of Severus. It was good to see Severus and Sirius come to an understanding about Harry and each other. I’m curious to see what comes up with Musgrave. Did he escape? Is he dead? Or are you throwing us a red herring? I suppose I must wait until the next chapter to find out. Well done and keep up the marvellous work. Grant. Author's Response: Thank you for your too kind review. I don't think Severus and Sirius will ever be chummy, but for Harry's sake, I think they realise they have to at least tolerate each other. Just as I told the last reviewer, much of the mystery surrounding Kenneth will be answered next chapter. Hope to see you there. ~Missyann
Author's Response: Is Sirius on the money or is he just speculating? Enquiring minds want to know...and will find out next chapter. Bruahahaha! ~Missyann
Author's Response: Sorry it took so long to respond, but the update is posted. Thank you. ~Missyann |
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