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Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Kids Do the Darndest Things 02 Jun 2010 3:51 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL! Severus is so overprotective, isn't he?

    Me thinks that Sev is beginning to like Lucy too. Lucy is Slytherin, well isn't that interesting?

    Very clever the way that you came up with the back story for how Severus became Harry 's guardian, and how Sev and Lily were bonded by blood, thus making the blood wards work for Severus and Harry.


    Onto the next chappie...

    Author's Response:

    Severus overprotective? Nah...what makes you think that?

    Yep, Lucy is now a Snake. I always thought that Slytherin was a House for the ambitious and cunning, and to me, that has never equated to evil. That is a stereotype I would love to see broken. Even nice people can be Slytherin.

    I thought the idea of a blood 'brother' ritual was a pretty clever way of overcoming blood-wards, if I do say so, myself. ;>)

    Thanks again for the review.

    ~Missyann

Title: Lucy's Woes 02 Jun 2010 3:29 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hee hee! Harry is such a precocious little boy. What a sweetie. It sounds as though his wish for Sev and Lucy to get together, might just be realised.

    Great chappie, and loved the toy top idea.
Title: Lucy's Woes 02 Jun 2010 3:29 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Hee hee! Harry is such a precocious little boy. What a sweetie. It sounds as though his wish for Sev and Lucy to get together, might just be realised.

    Great chappie, and loved the toy top idea.

    Author's Response:

    Hee Hee. Harry is a sweetheart. I love writing him. Can't give too much on Sev and Lucy because that would just give too much story away.

    You know, I researched old-fashioned toys for nearly three days before I came up with one to make a suitably original magical toy. I'm glad to know the research was worth the time.

    Thank you for the review, Dawn.

    ~Missyann

Title: Harry's Crush 02 Jun 2010 3:22 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Harry sounds so adorable, and seems to have a BIG crush on Lucy. That is very sweet and too cute.

    Kenneth sounds like a pompous ass!

    I'm so glad that you came over here Melissa. Onto to the next chappie.

    Author's Response:

    Hi, Dawn,

    Welome to my story. I love six-year olds. They're right there somewhere between toddler and big kid.

    I'm glad to be over here too, with other's who love Snape and Harry gen-fics. Too fun!

    Kenneth can give a pompous ass lessons on how to be a pompous ass, if you ask me...and I should know. ;>)

     Glad to have you, Dawn. So happy you're enjoying the story and thank you for the review.

    ~Missyann

Title: Thank you, Aberforth and Alf 01 Jun 2010 3:36 am
Reviewer: NMG (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just came across this site last night at the suggestion of a friend. I saw your story in the recent file and decided to browse-WOW! You are either from the U.K. or you have done your homework well.

    This story is amazing. Your Lucy is well developed, your depiction of a six-year-old Hary is spot on, and although Snape is somewhat OOC, the changes you made in him due to his changed circumstances is entirely believable.

    This story could have easily been cliche and trite, but you masterfully made it into something original and very intelligent. Bravo.

    Grant

    Author's Response:

    OMG! I don't know what to say. I am beyond flattered. Thank you.

    I'm not a Brit, but my brother-in-law is. What info I haven't been able to gleen from him, I did get through research and the help of my wonderful beta, Tambrathegreat.

    Thank you, for your very kind review, and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story.

    ~Missyann

Title: Thank you, Aberforth and Alf 31 May 2010 10:46 pm
Reviewer: mworth1019 (Signed) [Report This]
    what a great story... love it, like Alf....and Lucy is great.... read up to this part in one go... so hurry up and update...

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for your review. So glad to see that you're enjoying it and my Lucy. She's my first real OC and she has really been a joy to write. I'm working on chapter 30, but I'm going t Florida tomorrow. Still hope to have next chapie up this week.

     Thanks again
    ~Missyann

Title: Thank you, Aberforth and Alf 31 May 2010 8:52 pm
Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    A good story, was a very pleasurable read. Can't wait for more updates! (:

    Author's Response:

    Thank you very much. You are my first reviewer...Hurray! This has been a fun story to write.

    ~Missyann


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