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Reviews For Life's Best Laid Plans
Me thinks that Sev is beginning to like Lucy too. Lucy is Slytherin, well isn't that interesting? Very clever the way that you came up with the back story for how Severus became Harry 's guardian, and how Sev and Lily were bonded by blood, thus making the blood wards work for Severus and Harry. Onto the next chappie... Author's Response: Severus overprotective? Nah...what makes you think that? Yep, Lucy is now a Snake. I always thought that Slytherin was a House for the ambitious and cunning, and to me, that has never equated to evil. That is a stereotype I would love to see broken. Even nice people can be Slytherin. I thought the idea of a blood 'brother' ritual was a pretty clever way of overcoming blood-wards, if I do say so, myself. ;>) Thanks again for the review. ~Missyann
Great chappie, and loved the toy top idea.
Great chappie, and loved the toy top idea. Author's Response: Hee Hee. Harry is a sweetheart. I love writing him. Can't give too much on Sev and Lucy because that would just give too much story away. You know, I researched old-fashioned toys for nearly three days before I came up with one to make a suitably original magical toy. I'm glad to know the research was worth the time. Thank you for the review, Dawn. ~Missyann
Kenneth sounds like a pompous ass! I'm so glad that you came over here Melissa. Onto to the next chappie. Author's Response: Hi, Dawn, Welome to my story. I love six-year olds. They're right there somewhere between toddler and big kid. I'm glad to be over here too, with other's who love Snape and Harry gen-fics. Too fun! Kenneth can give a pompous ass lessons on how to be a pompous ass, if you ask me...and I should know. ;>) Glad to have you, Dawn. So happy you're enjoying the story and thank you for the review. ~Missyann
This story is amazing. Your Lucy is well developed, your depiction of a six-year-old Hary is spot on, and although Snape is somewhat OOC, the changes you made in him due to his changed circumstances is entirely believable. This story could have easily been cliche and trite, but you masterfully made it into something original and very intelligent. Bravo. Grant Author's Response: OMG! I don't know what to say. I am beyond flattered. Thank you. I'm not a Brit, but my brother-in-law is. What info I haven't been able to gleen from him, I did get through research and the help of my wonderful beta, Tambrathegreat. Thank you, for your very kind review, and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story. ~Missyann
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. So glad to see that you're enjoying it and my Lucy. She's my first real OC and she has really been a joy to write. I'm working on chapter 30, but I'm going t Florida tomorrow. Still hope to have next chapie up this week. Thanks again
Author's Response: Thank you very much. You are my first reviewer...Hurray! This has been a fun story to write. ~Missyann |
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