Aww, poor Severus and Lucy - interrupted at a crucial moment. Your description of the preservation process on the book interested me as I used to do paper preservation. It was nice to read of Lucy's skill.
Oh my. Mountain Dew and a Gibson guitar. My musician husband would highly approve. Lucy's family is a fun group and it sounds like Severus has their blessing for his courtship of Lucy. One comment, though. You wrote "The responsibility was unphantomable." I believe the word you wanted was unfathomable.
I was looking forward to something in one of the chapters about Severus reading the book to Harry. Sounds like Severus is finding out how painful fatherhood can be sometimes.Poor Lucy. She picked a nasty piece of work when she became engaged to Kenneth. Still, I thin our favorite potion's master is a match for him.
'Collywobbles' - what a lovely word. I hadn't imagined that Lucy was pregnant, though it sounds like it was a surprise to her, too.
Ahhhh finished! I have to say I absolutely loved everything about this story, kept me hooked from the very beginning! You've got an amazing style of writing that makes everything flow so naturally! And that was just the most amazing epilogue, I'm so happy for their little family :) I hope you do something when Harry's a bit older and going to Hogwarts maybe?
Woop wooooop! About time!
That scene with Lucy and Felicity was absolutely heartbreaking! Nicely written :)
YAAAAAY :D Severus is going to be over the moon!
This chapter was absolutely heartbreaking :'( That scene with Sev and Felicity, and then the letter from Lily! I feel emotionally drained after reading it, such an amazingly, well written chapter! :)
OMG FELICITYYYYYY! :( And lucy! Really hoping lucy's not permanently damaged!
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