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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
I felt a sense of foreboding as Voldemort contemplated moving to this fortress and the DEs' escape ...I mean, anything that pleases Voldie can't be good, right? And then poor Severus...but enough said there...how chilling and sick Voldemort is, though we already knew that. It's lovely at the end, how determined Harry is to care for Severus and to stay with him, how he gave Severus his potion containing the Draught of Peace. Yeah, Sev, that's a good one to keep on hand...don't think I'd let it run out again! I do wonder if there would be any ramifications (other than making Severus confused and drowsy) with it being mixed with Dreamless Sleep. It doesn't seem to have knocked Sev unconscious, at least not at once. But then he is in an unusually emotional state. And then the last, with the comments about Rosa, I'm so eager to read the next bit...so I'm really hoping you do get part 2 up soon! Author's Response: Wow Kristeh, thank you for your wonderful review. Yeah, this is a heavy chapter. Here we visit the dark side of Severus' moon- his eclipse if you will. The title is Eclipse of Two Souls. We saw Harry's struggle early on in the story, now we'll deal with Severus'. The non con was the catalyst that started the unraveling of his protective wall. Severus couldn't hold it together any longer, but thankfully Harry was there for him. Yours is the only review I've received and for your request, I will indeed do all I can to get the next chapter up tomorrow. Your a sweetheart for taking the time to read my little fic. Thank you for that and thank you for always sharing your thoughts with me. Hugs to you Kristeh, SHaria
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