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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
If Priestly is unable to remember exactly how he became Imperiused, I wonder if that means there'll be any more trouble from Crabbe and Goyle. It was Crabbe and Goyle, wasn't it? Sorry, but I just can't remember for sure at the moment. I enjoyed seeing the Order members interacting, though I was annoyed with Robards. Yes, of course it's frustrating that they don't know Voldemort's location, but Severus is doing the best he can and a darn site more than Robards is. It's always good to see Harry with his friends and I'm glad he's recovering. And Remus will be around more often too, yay! I can't blame Harry at all for being afraid to portkey. He hasn't had very good experiences with them. I think Severus' solution was brilliant, and it showed how understanding he can be with Harry now. Now I can't wait to read about them celebrating Christmas at the villa...it sounds lovely. Author's Response: Hello there Kristeh. Yes, it was Crabbe and Goyle (those trouble makers) and we'll just have to see if they cause trouble again. As for Robards being a jerk, I was just playing up the fact that Snape is never looked upon too highly, you know the whole theme of is he a good guy or a bad guy... And now I'm off to work on the next chappie. I'm hoping to have it ready just around Christmas time. Thanks for your lovely review. Hugs, SHaria
So, your first real "break" in your old story line--last time he went with Ron's family for Christmas while Sev went to Tuscany all by his lonesome.(Yep, I did go back and do a comparison between the two stories just to see "how" you changed it. . . I'm such a geek! ) Still really enjoying your "new take" on your original story. Thanks for the update! Author's Response: What a delightful review! Thank you Mervoparkite! I actually went over and checked Lexicon and Harrywiki and you're right, Madame Pomfrey is not associated with any particular house. Hmm. I'm tickled you went back and compared stories. You'll see more similarities but obviously there will be some significant differences. Glad you're enjoying this version and thanks for reviewing. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Hello p_stotts. This was addressed quite a few chapters ago and discussed further in some of the reviews. Basically, I could never understand why in canon, Harry didn't harbor some ill will toward Lupin for always being so distant, and so I have adressed this issue in my story. If you want to read more about it, just scan back in the reviews. Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts. (I'll just delete the multiple postings). Hugs, SHaria
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MJ Author's Response: Thanks MJ. You'll find out how Harry got there in the next chapter, which I am off to go work on right now. Thanks for sharing and I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thank you alifromnm for taking time and letting me know how much you are enjoying the story. I of course, agree whole heartedly with your comments regarding Sev and Harry. Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria |
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