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Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 12 Feb 2023 3:47 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    That was so emotionally astute to portray Harry’s hurt and betrayal over Severus forgiving Lupin. Harry’s own conversation with Lupin was really well done too.
Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 01 Mar 2011 10:17 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    OK great chapter but and its a big one you cannot have someone living in Cambridge and attending Oxford! It is just not done they are different universities and too far apart for commuting besides they are great rivals and do not share acommadation. Sorry to spoil it but send hermione to Cambridge or have them live in oxford!

    Author's Response: No worries Fmh. It's all fixed. The cottage is now in Oxford. Thanks for letting me know! Hugs, SHaria 
Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 26 Feb 2011 1:33 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    It's great to see Harry and Remus working things out, too. Remus is such an interesting character. He's kind, but distant, never letting anyone too close, or he has been in the past. Hopefully, he's willing to work on that too. Of course Remus' issues are very understandable, considering the losses he's suffered. He's been scarred by the war too.

    I loved the scene with Harry and the little kids. It was too cute.

    And it seems like a brilliant plan that the Order has come up with, but I'm worried that something will go wrong. And how brave are those Aurors! They deserve the Order of Merlin.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much Kristeh. I agree, Remus is a very complicated character but his issues did affect Harry and I'm glad he got to get it all off his chest (which he never got to do in canon). And yes, I really loved writing that scene with the little first years. A nice lighthearted moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hugs, SHaria

     

Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 25 Feb 2011 3:56 pm
Reviewer: Frostbluete (Signed) [Report This]
    I just wanted to say that I very much enjoy reading this story and look forward to the next chapter! And I appreciate the way you deal with the topic of homosexual relationships. It's refreshing to read a story where it's just normal, you know, without dramatic inner or public conflicts and outings. Sure, that's the way it is for some people, difficult and conflicted and such, but not all! And maybe it's still not a given to just be accepted, but I think when it's so normal that we don't have to discuss it anymore - that's when homosexuals are truly accepted. So, yeah, feels good to read this, just wanted to mention that :)

    Author's Response: I so totally agree with you Frostbluete. The original version of this story (there's actually 2: Eclipse of the Soul and the sequel: The Catamite) are Snarrys and are over at HPFandom.net. Eclipse is one of the featured stories there (lower left hand column on the home page) or you can just find me in the authors list. After a little break (when I finish this Sevitus version) I will start the third part of the Snarry trilogy. The Trilogy is called: The Temerity of Love and the third part will be titled: What Matters Most. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 23 Feb 2011 4:57 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    That was unexpected bit about Remus and Sirius, but otherwise, it was a beautiful chapter! The mellowing of Sev, maturity of Harry and gentleness of Remus all come through very nicely..

    Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed the chappie (mostly). There's a reason for the R/S relationship. Thank you so much DS for sharing your impressions with me. Hugs, SHaria 
Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 23 Feb 2011 3:28 am
Reviewer: karee (Signed) [Report This]
    i suppose i feel bad for Remus but still he was a coward , hopefully he can show Harry he has change and there will be no more running from his problem and show that he's a griffindor and that he really loves Harry.

    Author's Response: I respect your opinion regarding Remus, but I don't know if his situation is so black and white. Living with lycanthropy would have to exact a huge toll on him, but all of Harry's questions have always been my questions. I always wished Remus hand't left after 3rd year, and even though V. had returned, it wasn't right everyone ran off and left H to deal with what happened in the graveyard, and of course the Ministry and Sirius. Yeah, why didn't Remus go after him. Anyway, onward and upward. Remus will have his moment. Thanks again karee. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 23 Feb 2011 12:34 am
Reviewer: Aeri21 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I really loved the chapter, though the title seems a bit ominous...the calm before the storm?

    Anyways, great job! I'm really glad Harry and Remus finally made up.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much Aeri21, I'm glad you liked the chapter. And as for the title, it's the truth- this is (or was) the calm before the storm. Just wait. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 35. Before the Storm 22 Feb 2011 9:36 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I'm so glad Harry forgave Remus and reached out to him. Harry's feelings of resentment were justified though, but at least now they've cleared the air.

    Great chappie S'Haria.

    Author's Response:

    I totally agree and I'm also glad that Severus was able to help him to see reason. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter Pandora and thank you so much for leaving a review. Hugs, SHaria


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