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Title: Chapter 39. The Storm 12 Feb 2023 7:57 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    Very satisfying chapter! Thanks so much.
Title: Chapter 39. The Storm 23 Jun 2011 4:39 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, SHaria, awesome chapter! I'm sorry I missed it; it looks like you updated when I was very busy with school and not getting on the computer as much.

    I loved how you have described the battle here, and how Severus came to Dumbledore's aid, and how Hermione and Ron and Neville talked Harry into letting them come with him. I can see why Harry wanted them to stay behind, but they're right...DA's was about preparing them for the war and now it's time for action.

    I loved Dobby's courage, when he is obviously terrified of Voldemort, but insists that he will go where Harry does. Of course I expected nothing less from him...Dobby has phenomenal courage! A true Gryffindor.

    And of course I loved the end, with Voldie going splat! Awesome!

    Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review Kristeh. I want to tell you how much I appreciate that you relay the details you most enjoed from the chapter. One more chapter to go and I just can't sit down and write it, mostly because RL has gotten so busy, I just can't seem to shift gears and get into Harry land. Oh well, thanks again for the review. Hugs, SHaria  
Title: Chapter 39. The Storm 10 Jun 2011 5:50 am
Reviewer: Eowynn (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so glad I found your story. It had been a true delight to read. I will be anxiously awaiting the next chapter. Thank you.

    Author's Response: Thank you Eowynn, I'm glad you did too and I'm happy you've enjoyed it. I'm working on the epilogue and will post it as soon as I can. Most of my work is at HP Fandom if you're interested. Different genre.  Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 39. The Storm 07 Jun 2011 9:42 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Good action chapter could hardly breathe it was so fast but also very well crafted well done

    Author's Response: Wow, thanks Fmh, I glad it came across like that. I'll have to let Willingly Suspend know. It's kind of like walking on a tightrope to balance narration, action, emotional stuff and timeline stuff and have it all come together. Hugs :) SHaria
Title: Chapter 39. The Storm 06 Jun 2011 4:26 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    A fitting end for old Tom. But is this truly the end? Great chapter. I kept hoping it wouldn't end too soon and it really delivered!

    Author's Response: Why thank you p stotts, I'm pleased you enjoyed the chapter and Voldie's ending moment. Well, sadly the end of this story is also near. I just the epilogue to write and then I'm heading back over to finish the trilogy, but I might pick this story line up at a later date. Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 39. The Storm 06 Jun 2011 4:38 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    We are now clearly in what would have been Catamite territory now. Once the abduction took place you dramatically changed the path of the story. I am still loving it and finding the changes quite entertaining.

    BTW--I like the SPLAT!

    Thanks for the update!

    Vonceil

    Author's Response: You are absolutely correct Mervoparkite, I did change the path dramatically. This Sevitus will be ending come next chapter. I will leave it open in case I wish to visit this genre in the future, but I really want to get back to the trilogy and I cannot keep up with 2 stories simultaneously (what was I thinking!). I'm pleased you've enjoyed this version of Eclipse. Thanks for the review and stay tuned for the Epilogue. Oh and I'm really glad you enjoyed 'splat'. WS warned that it sounded a bit like a bug splatting on a windshield, which I very much appreciated because my goal was for Voldemort's final ending to be pathetic. I believe I succeeded :)  Hugs, SHaria

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