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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
I loved how you have described the battle here, and how Severus came to Dumbledore's aid, and how Hermione and Ron and Neville talked Harry into letting them come with him. I can see why Harry wanted them to stay behind, but they're right...DA's was about preparing them for the war and now it's time for action. I loved Dobby's courage, when he is obviously terrified of Voldemort, but insists that he will go where Harry does. Of course I expected nothing less from him...Dobby has phenomenal courage! A true Gryffindor. And of course I loved the end, with Voldie going splat! Awesome! Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review Kristeh. I want to tell you how much I appreciate that you relay the details you most enjoed from the chapter. One more chapter to go and I just can't sit down and write it, mostly because RL has gotten so busy, I just can't seem to shift gears and get into Harry land. Oh well, thanks again for the review. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thank you Eowynn, I'm glad you did too and I'm happy you've enjoyed it. I'm working on the epilogue and will post it as soon as I can. Most of my work is at HP Fandom if you're interested. Different genre. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Fmh, I glad it came across like that. I'll have to let Willingly Suspend know. It's kind of like walking on a tightrope to balance narration, action, emotional stuff and timeline stuff and have it all come together. Hugs :) SHaria
Author's Response: Why thank you p stotts, I'm pleased you enjoyed the chapter and Voldie's ending moment. Well, sadly the end of this story is also near. I just the epilogue to write and then I'm heading back over to finish the trilogy, but I might pick this story line up at a later date. Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria
BTW--I like the SPLAT! Thanks for the update! Vonceil Author's Response: You are absolutely correct Mervoparkite, I did change the path dramatically. This Sevitus will be ending come next chapter. I will leave it open in case I wish to visit this genre in the future, but I really want to get back to the trilogy and I cannot keep up with 2 stories simultaneously (what was I thinking!). I'm pleased you've enjoyed this version of Eclipse. Thanks for the review and stay tuned for the Epilogue. Oh and I'm really glad you enjoyed 'splat'. WS warned that it sounded a bit like a bug splatting on a windshield, which I very much appreciated because my goal was for Voldemort's final ending to be pathetic. I believe I succeeded :) Hugs, SHaria |
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