Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 06 Feb 2023 1:37 am
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a striking shift in perspective and heart for Snape. I look forward to seeing what lies ahead for him and Harry.
Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 16 Jun 2010 4:22 am
Reviewer: Anon #37 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Quite good.

    Author's Response: Thank you!
Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 04 Jun 2010 6:40 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    This continues to be a beautiful story. I love how you portrayed both Snape and Dumbledore.

    Author's Response: Thanks again. Yes, their discussion was something that, in my opinion, definately needed to take place. Glad you enjoyed it. SHaria
Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 03 Jun 2010 3:54 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really loving this story! You have great insight into the characters' emotions and thoughts. I especially enjoyed this chapter and how Severus has had an epiphany. The last scene with Harry holding onto Severus' fingers and Severus sitting by his bedside is just beautiful.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much Kristeh. I was actually a late comer to the HP books and as someone pressed for time, I listened to them (rather than read) while commuting. I must have listened to each book at least four times. I can just hear all the character's voices in my head as I write (Jim Dale is soooo great). I'll sit real quite and think: now, how would Dumbledore say this or what would Severus's take be on this ...

    Someday, maybe when I retire, I would very much like to sit down and visually read the books. Another sense ... right?

    Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria

Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 03 Jun 2010 12:20 am
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm loving this story! Update soon please :)

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like ... make that 'love' it. Since I'm new to P and S, everything has to be approved before it can be posted. Chapter 4 should be out by Friday, I should think. hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 03 Jun 2010 12:06 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    As I have been following this story on the other site, I will be interested to see how the two diverge, as I know where "part two" of the original story goes, there will have to be some serious differences to make this a parent/child relationship.

    I am amazigly currious--and looking forward to it. You are an excellent writer and I look forward to the future of this version of your story.

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words V. I honestly believe that Eclipse (and TC) could go both ways. Thanks for reading and for your review! SHaria
Title: Chapter 3. Retrospect 02 Jun 2010 11:06 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    I am so enjoying this story. This last chapter, the last paragraphs had me in tears. Two hurt and broken young men, who, if only given the chance can heal each other. Harry has a forgiving nature, if he truly believes that Severus really has changed toward him, all will be forgiven with time. Forgiven, yes, forgotten, never. Thank you for the update. I look forward to your next.

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review alifromnm. Yes, there are some sad times in this story which also leaves me in tears, but there are also light moments and happy times. I love Harry, he's my hero. Sev is a good guy and a fascinating character. Don't worry, they'll work this all out. Just hang in there. Take care, SHaria

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