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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
Author's Response: Thank you so much for alerting me to this. You're right and I've correrted the mistake. Cheers, SHaria
Author's Response: Sevitus: Severus mentors Harry. Severitus: Severus is H's Dad or he adopts him. I'm glad you are enjoying the fic. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria
Great job and very well-written! Author's Response: Thank you so much Kristeh for sharing your impressions. I love the vulnerability of this chapter, both Harry's and the Weasley's. Because of what Harry is going through, everyone around him who loves and cares about him winds up being - exposed. Yes? Hugs, SHaria
I'm glad Dumbledore is finally admitting all his mistakes regarding Harry. Great Chapter :) Author's Response: Yes, a sad chapter. I always felt that an apology from Dumbledore was certainly called for. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thanks Kim. Yes, so true for those who have been emotionally wounded, people and animals alike. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, SHaria
Author's Response: I completely and totally agree with you; that's why I wrote this fic. Thanks for your review autumnamberleaves. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Chapter 5 should be posted this weekend. SHaria
I'm curious to see what role Severus plays in this story, and I hope we see more of him soon. This is a great start. I really feel for Harry, and it reminds me of the times a friend was going through periods of depression. Author's Response: Thank you for sharing your thoughts EllaEleniel. To be honest, I had a bout with depression years ago after a traumatic event, so I simply drew upon how I felt at the time and my therapy sessions (which was ... you guessed it- talking). Both Harry and Severus have been affected by emotional trauma, the difference is that Harry's loved ones took the bull by the horn (or should I say the lion by the tail) and got help for him, where as Severus never had this opportunity and became closed off and bitter (something had to make him that way). Harry will process through his depression much more quickly than Severus, but he'll get there also. Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria |
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