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Title: Chapter 4. Detached 06 Feb 2023 3:23 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I really appreciated Dumbledore’s raw and honest apology. Very refreshing!
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 23 Dec 2011 11:43 am
Reviewer: The Indian Patriot (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, buddy! it's FAWKES nt Falkes

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for alerting me to this. You're right and I've correrted the mistake. Cheers, SHaria
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 23 Dec 2011 11:43 am
Reviewer: The Indian Patriot (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, buddy! it's FAWKES nt Falkes
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 23 Dec 2011 11:42 am
Reviewer: The Indian Patriot (Signed) [Report This]
    Hey, buddy! it's FAWKES nt Falkes
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 28 Mar 2011 10:46 pm
Reviewer: multitaskmom (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm...I don't think I know the difference between Sevitus and Severitus. Loving the story either way. :)

    Author's Response: Sevitus: Severus mentors Harry.  Severitus: Severus is H's Dad or he adopts him. I'm glad you are enjoying the fic. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 12 Jun 2010 3:44 am
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, what a lovely chapter, though sad. Obviously Harry is struggling with depression and grief, and it is very hard for him and for those around him. Thank goodness that the Weasleys, Poppy, and Albus are committed to helping Harry and that Albus has gotten him to agree to counseling. I hope it will help.

    Great job and very well-written!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much Kristeh for sharing your impressions. I love the vulnerability of this chapter, both Harry's and the Weasley's. Because of what Harry is going through, everyone around him who loves and cares about him winds up being - exposed. Yes? Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 06 Jun 2010 2:42 am
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww, poor Harry :(
    I'm glad Dumbledore is finally admitting all his mistakes regarding Harry.
    Great Chapter :)

    Author's Response: Yes, a sad chapter. I always felt that an apology from Dumbledore was certainly called for. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 04 Jun 2010 8:07 pm
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    A very sweet chapter. Harry is surrounded by love but unable to accept it. Very realistic considering what he's been through.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks Kim. Yes, so true for those who have been emotionally wounded, people and animals alike. Thanks for sharing your thoughts, SHaria

Title: Chapter 4. Detached 04 Jun 2010 4:06 am
Reviewer: autumnamberleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter Sharia! This is really realistic. It's always bugged me that in the books and movies Harry recovers extremely way too easily! Great chapter and looking forward to more.

    Author's Response: I completely and totally agree with you; that's why I wrote this fic. Thanks for your review autumnamberleaves. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Chapter 5 should be posted this weekend. SHaria
Title: Chapter 4. Detached 04 Jun 2010 3:43 am
Reviewer: EllaEleniel (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad Harry is finally going to get help. His depression is such a classical case, and I can't wait to see who is counselor is and how he'll respond to the sessions.

    I'm curious to see what role Severus plays in this story, and I hope we see more of him soon. This is a great start. I really feel for Harry, and it reminds me of the times a friend was going through periods of depression.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you for sharing your thoughts EllaEleniel. To be honest, I had a bout with depression years ago after a traumatic event, so I simply drew upon how I felt at the time and my therapy sessions (which was ... you guessed it- talking).

    Both Harry and Severus have been affected by emotional trauma, the difference is that Harry's loved ones took the bull by the horn (or should I say the lion by the tail) and got help for him, where as Severus never had this opportunity and became closed off and bitter (something had to make him that way). Harry will process through his depression much more quickly than Severus, but he'll get there also.

    Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria  


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