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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it Karee. Things are going to heat up during the next few chapters. I've been out of town and will update as soon as I can. Thank you so much for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria
Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you so much Kristeh. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I wasn't certain how this chapter would be received, but the response has been favorable thus far. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, SHaria
Author's Response: I'm no authority on the subject of young men deciding their preference, but I do know that Harry was raised in a household that frowned upon homosexuality (I believe Vernon used the British slang: Nancy Boy, so I wouldn't be all that surprised if Harry might feel a tad self conscious. I'm not certain if I left in the sentence about Anthony being sensitive to Harry's preoccupation as they walked up to the castle (I had to do some editing to make this into a Sevitus chapter and not a Snarry chapter), but there used to be a sentence alluding to that fact. So, we'll just leave it there. Gotta go. Thanks for the review. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked Harry's adaptation of Occlumency. Thanks for reviewing. Hugs, SHaria |
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