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Title: Chapter 10: Personal Matters 06 Feb 2023 4:55 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    It’s nice to see Harry’s worry and care for Severus.
Title: Chapter 10: Personal Matters 08 Jul 2010 5:32 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter! I'm glad that Anthony is there for Harry and is so patient and gentle. Sounds like they'd better be careful, though, lol. They almost didn't make it out of the greenhouse unscathed!

    Yeah, I'm not surprised at all that Remus is so distant. He has his own issues with letting himself get close to people, which is perhaps understandable, but it's so hurtful for Harry. Remus needs to see this and work on it. I'm having him act in a similar way in my own story.

    And I can certainly understand Harry's fear when Severus is summoned. Severus plays a very dangerous game and Harry has already suffered so much loss, he's terrified of losing someone else he cares for.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response:

    Hi Kristeh, Thank you for yet another insightful review.

    I believe I first came across the 'Remus distancing himself' scenario, in a Lilyseyes one shot a couple of years ago. In that story, he disappeared after losing James, Lily and Sirius ... and Harry, all in one tragic moment. It made sense that he might do that and this is now the aftermath, coupled with the challenging task of relating to teenagers.

    And yes, Harry and Anthony are so cute together. I fear I am going to be on everyone's 'list' after the next chapter.

    Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria

Title: Chapter 10: Personal Matters 06 Jul 2010 4:32 am
Reviewer: karee (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! Thanks for the update.....now I'm scare for severus but can only wait to see what happens...ahh I love how harry's romance is going, so please update soon, thanks

    Author's Response: Oh, oh- Your comments have me concerned. Um... you'll see. Sorry to be vague, but chapter 11 has some fireworks. Glad you are enjoying the story (so far). Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 10: Personal Matters 06 Jul 2010 12:26 am
Reviewer: gizmama (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

    Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I'll have the next chapter up this week. Thanks for your review, SHaria
Title: Chapter 10: Personal Matters 05 Jul 2010 11:16 pm
Reviewer: frodolove12 (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon :D

    Author's Response: Hi again frodolove12. If I remember correctly, chapter 10 has a big surprise. I'll put it up this week for sure. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 10: Personal Matters 05 Jul 2010 11:55 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! It tears him up to see Severus tortured and knowing that there is nothing he can do to stop it at this point must be awful. I do hope that Severus will be alright and that his exhaustion won't cause him any problems at the 'meeting'.

    Harry and Anthony's relationship is certainly coming along nicely. They very nearly got caught in the shed and should probably be more careful in the future. I'm glad that Harry now knows some of the warning signs that he is going to have a power surge. It's good that he was able to lesson the impact, as well.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your sweet review silverstargirl. Well, just because Sev has had some bad outings with V, that doesn't mean they're all that way. I like the fact that this is the first time we see Harry reaching out to Sev, concerned for his welfare. And I love the teenage relationship for Harry. He needed that. Thanks for sharing, SHaria

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