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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
Author's Response: Hi Frodolove12! I'm glad you liked the chapter. I actually posted the next chapter today, just waiting for Obsidian Embrace to approve it. Thanks for reviewing. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Try not to worry silverstargirl. I'll tell you- no one dies, but it's not a bed of roses either. Hang in there and thanks for sharing, SHaria
Author's Response: Thanks missny1. I'll get 12 up as soon as I can. I'm glad you enjoyed 'The Return'. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Sorry!
Yeah, I'm not surprised at all that Remus is so distant. He has his own issues with letting himself get close to people, which is perhaps understandable, but it's so hurtful for Harry. Remus needs to see this and work on it. I'm having him act in a similar way in my own story. And I can certainly understand Harry's fear when Severus is summoned. Severus plays a very dangerous game and Harry has already suffered so much loss, he's terrified of losing someone else he cares for. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Hi Kristeh, Thank you for yet another insightful review. I believe I first came across the 'Remus distancing himself' scenario, in a Lilyseyes one shot a couple of years ago. In that story, he disappeared after losing James, Lily and Sirius ... and Harry, all in one tragic moment. It made sense that he might do that and this is now the aftermath, coupled with the challenging task of relating to teenagers. And yes, Harry and Anthony are so cute together. I fear I am going to be on everyone's 'list' after the next chapter. Thanks again. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Oh, oh- Your comments have me concerned. Um... you'll see. Sorry to be vague, but chapter 11 has some fireworks. Glad you are enjoying the story (so far). Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I'll have the next chapter up this week. Thanks for your review, SHaria
Author's Response: Hi again frodolove12. If I remember correctly, chapter 10 has a big surprise. I'll put it up this week for sure. Hugs, SHaria
Harry and Anthony's relationship is certainly coming along nicely. They very nearly got caught in the shed and should probably be more careful in the future. I'm glad that Harry now knows some of the warning signs that he is going to have a power surge. It's good that he was able to lesson the impact, as well. Author's Response: Thanks for your sweet review silverstargirl. Well, just because Sev has had some bad outings with V, that doesn't mean they're all that way. I like the fact that this is the first time we see Harry reaching out to Sev, concerned for his welfare. And I love the teenage relationship for Harry. He needed that. Thanks for sharing, SHaria
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it Karee. Things are going to heat up during the next few chapters. I've been out of town and will update as soon as I can. Thank you so much for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria |
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