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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
What an interesting story. About the text of strategy, which he is reading..Is it a text? Or were you inspired by the manuscript of Al-Mankair, the Book of Five Rings by Miyamoto, or perhaps The Art of War by Sun Zi ? Quote of the last:' The supreme art of war is to subdue the enemy without fighting.' Please give more quotes from your text and the lessons he is learning. I am also a loner and a victim of severe bullying. Harry's quiet fighting really rings a bell in my heart.
Author's Response: Hi Blue Water, Thank you for the kind review. The original snarry version of this story and its sequel The Tenacity of Love (I renamed The Catamite to The Tenacity of Love, it fits better) are both on fanfiction.net. Since there was another person with the penn name Sharia, I had to modify my name to: SHaria- The Original. If you search by writer and type in that name, you'll find both stories. Though several scenes are the same, the snarry version of Eclipse is different and my personal favorite. I hope you search them out and please let me know your thoughts when you finish reading them. Enjoy. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thank you so much for alerting me to this. You're right and I've correrted the mistake. Cheers, SHaria
-Adrienne Author's Response: I'm so pleased you enjoyed the story Adrienne. I probably won't be visiting this genre again any time soon; if you'd like to read the original version and it's sequel they are over at hpfandom.net same pen name. Thank you for leaving a review. Hugs, SHaria
I'm glad that Severus was able to reach Harry and convince that he can make it and has a lot to live for. A perfect ending, and I hope that maybe one day you might write a sequel for it, or at least maybe some one-shots set in this world? Great job again! Author's Response: Oh Kristeh, thank you so much. I really appreciate your entreaty; we'll see. Thanks again for all of your lovely reviews and I look forward to more chapters posted in your stories. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thank you Mozalini. That's nice to hear. Hugs, SHaria |
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