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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for leaving a review. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: You do have a point there, p stotts. Thanks for the feedback. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thankk you for your condolences Fmh. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter (and sorry for the cliffy). Hugs, SHaria
I like the story and your writing, not sure if I'm going to read the original. Last year I would have without question, just not the mood I'm in at this time but that will change, I'm sure. Author's Response: First of all, thank you for reviewing Sithtar. I'm sorry to disappoint you, but this Sevitus version will never become the original story, which is in fact now two stories. Yes, the first installment follows Harry and Severus as they face their own personal demons. The second story addresses recovery from rape - both from the victim's perspective and his/her partner and the third is about rights and justice. But most of all, the trilogy is a love story. SHaria
These past couple of chapters have been so well-written and powerful, though I'm afraid for Harry. Things were going so well, too, until the boys decided to be...well, boys. I can understand their need to celebrate, to have one last adventure before graduation (though if any of them had been thinking clearly they ought to have realized that with a war going on, adventures were not in short supply and that they could easily get more than they bargained for). Their bravado and self-confidence is also typical...but they really should have known better. I am glad to see that Harry is attempting to stay calm and to think his way through, and I hope he'll be successful. He made a stupid mistake, yes, but no one knows it better than he does, and I do hope he won't have to suffer. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thanks for your condolences Kristeh and for the lovely review. You of course would understand how vulnerable it feels to write & what an intimate relation develops with one's beta. I told Willingly Suspend she had to promise that nothing is going to happen to her. On to the story. Yes, teenagers will be teenagers. Harry is a good kid but he's human and subject to making mistakes. So here he finds himself in this dire situation but has managed to use what he's learned. The only kicker is: he can't move and therefore is unable to cast spells. A missing link in his training. Stay tuned for further developments and thanks again. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: You're welcome Fmh, and thank you for saying so. I'm glad you liked it. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: I'm sorry multitaskmom! (luv your name) You can always read the Snarry version (2 complete stories!) over at HPF or ... well, just be patient. LOL I'll get the next chappie posted as soon as possible. Hugs! SHaria
Author's Response: Thanks alifromnm and again, I am very sorry to do this to you guys. Hang in there! Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Sevitus: Severus mentors Harry. Severitus: Severus is H's Dad or he adopts him. I'm glad you are enjoying the fic. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria |
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