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Reviews For Eclipse of the Soul, the Sevitus version
Author's Response: I know and I'm sorry. I'm certain this will be the theme of all the reviews on this chappie. Mea cuopa, SHaria
Author's Response: No worries Fmh. It's all fixed. The cottage is now in Oxford. Thanks for letting me know! Hugs, SHaria
I loved the scene with Harry and the little kids. It was too cute. And it seems like a brilliant plan that the Order has come up with, but I'm worried that something will go wrong. And how brave are those Aurors! They deserve the Order of Merlin. Looking forward to more! Author's Response: Thank you so much Kristeh. I agree, Remus is a very complicated character but his issues did affect Harry and I'm glad he got to get it all off his chest (which he never got to do in canon). And yes, I really loved writing that scene with the little first years. A nice lighthearted moment. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Hugs, SHaria
And it was lovely how concerned Harry was and how he stayed with Severus. Off to read the next chapter now! Author's Response: Glad you liked it Kristeh. I figured that if Remus saved Severus' life while in his werewolf form, that should certainly counter what happened at the Shreiking Shack. Thanks for sharing, SHaria
Author's Response: I so totally agree with you Frostbluete. The original version of this story (there's actually 2: Eclipse of the Soul and the sequel: The Catamite) are Snarrys and are over at HPFandom.net. Eclipse is one of the featured stories there (lower left hand column on the home page) or you can just find me in the authors list. After a little break (when I finish this Sevitus version) I will start the third part of the Snarry trilogy. The Trilogy is called: The Temerity of Love and the third part will be titled: What Matters Most. Thanks for sharing. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: I'm happy you enjoyed the chappie (mostly). There's a reason for the R/S relationship. Thank you so much DS for sharing your impressions with me. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: I respect your opinion regarding Remus, but I don't know if his situation is so black and white. Living with lycanthropy would have to exact a huge toll on him, but all of Harry's questions have always been my questions. I always wished Remus hand't left after 3rd year, and even though V. had returned, it wasn't right everyone ran off and left H to deal with what happened in the graveyard, and of course the Ministry and Sirius. Yeah, why didn't Remus go after him. Anyway, onward and upward. Remus will have his moment. Thanks again karee. Hugs, SHaria
Anyways, great job! I'm really glad Harry and Remus finally made up. Author's Response: Thank you so much Aeri21, I'm glad you liked the chapter. And as for the title, it's the truth- this is (or was) the calm before the storm. Just wait. Hugs, SHaria
Great chappie S'Haria. Author's Response: I totally agree and I'm also glad that Severus was able to help him to see reason. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter Pandora and thank you so much for leaving a review. Hugs, SHaria
Author's Response: Thank you Fmh, I'm pleased you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Hugs, SHaria |
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