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Title: Chapter 34. The Process of Perception, part 2 31 Jan 2011 8:10 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, a satisfying reconciliation, better late than never. I like how you portrayed everyone's emotions in this chapter. And good for Hermoine in keeping Harry from repeating his mistakes. The boy can learn after all! Sev would be proud.

    Author's Response: Thank you p_stotts. I couldn't agree more. The reconciliation between S and R was another issue that needed to be addressed in canon and wasn't. Now it's done. (But of course, where would we be without JKR? She's a genius!) Thank you so much for you charming review. It will take a couple of weeks before the next update (Harry meets Remus). Hugs to you, SHaria 
Title: Chapter 34. The Process of Perception, part 2 30 Jan 2011 11:27 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this! I think the image of Lupin as werewolf looking sad and imploringly at Sev will remain with me for a long time! I hope Harry and Remus will also mend their fences now!

    Author's Response: Thanks DS! I'm so pleased it made an impression with you. I felt that we had to go to the crux of the matter for Remus to redeem himself. As for the situation between he and Harry- well, we're getting there. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 33. The Process of Percepion, part 1 26 Jan 2011 3:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! I'm worried about Snape.

    Voldie is an idiot though. Imagine stunning Snape into unconsciousness so that he can't even answer the questions anyway,.

    Great chappie. Can't wait for next. Hope Snape will be alright.

    Author's Response:

    Hi there Pandora,

    Well Voldie just got carried away (as he does) with that darn Cruciatus curse, but keep in mind: Severus is important to Voldie, I don't think he'd do away with him for a slip up in judgement. The next chappie is with Willingly Suspend and I'll post it as soon as I can. Thanks for reviewing! Hugs, SHaria

Title: Chapter 33. The Process of Percepion, part 1 24 Jan 2011 10:31 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great chapter

    Author's Response: You are very welcome Fmh. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. Just wait till you read the next one! Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 33. The Process of Percepion, part 1 24 Jan 2011 4:06 pm
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Uh oh! Now what sort of trouble has Remus found? Great chapter!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it p stotts. You won't have to wait too long for an answer. Thanks for leaving a review! Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 32. Christmas In Tuscany 03 Jan 2011 11:17 pm
Reviewer: Kristeh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter again SHaria! I love everything, from the beginning when Severus is so gentle and kind to Harry to the end when they exchange gifts.

    I love Tuscan and Mediterrnean architecture and you do such a fantastic job describing the villa and its surroundings. The setting is just beautiful and I can really see it in my mind. It's almost like being there.

    Severus and Harry have already come a long way, and I think this holiday together has brought them even closer. It's lovely to see these two learning to love one another and to see joy coming into their lives. Harry has been fortunate to have wonderful friends, but even they are not like a family of his own, and Severus has been alone for a very long time. They really need each other.

    Giano and Phia are so kind and dignified, and I'm glad that Severus has set them free and they stay of their accord.

    Loved the exchange of gifts and I can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you Kristeh for your thoughtful review. I'm glad you like the descriptions of the villa. I've used this place in another HP story of mine and so seeing the two of them there just seems so ... right. As I wrote this version (of when Harry first sees the villa) I wondered if I could convey a clear picture to the readers. I'll have to go back and see how detailed I made it as these days I am working on flow and brevity.

    I too am happy and relieved that H and S's relationship has reached this point. Now they understand each other and Severus finally accepts that he cares about Harry. And then there's Giano and Phia. Somehow, I just couldn't see Severus keeping servents. I see G and P as having known S for so long, that their relationship is in a sort of gray area- somewhere between  Master, servant, nanny, uncle .... Does that make any sense?

    Hopefully the next chapter won't be too long in coming. As soon as I finish my other story (I only have 2 or 3 chapters remaining), I'll be able to devote all my time to Eclipse. Hugs, SHaria

     

     

Title: Chapter 32. Christmas In Tuscany 22 Dec 2010 6:21 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely fluffy chapter happy Christmas and thank you

    Author's Response: Aw, thanks Fmh. I'm glad you liked it. Happy Christmas to you too. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 2. Waning 22 Dec 2010 3:54 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Arthur is not much of a fighter, is he?

    Author's Response: Oh little-sun, you just need to read the next chapter. Let me know what you think after that. Hang in there, the beginning of this fic is depressing but Harry will come around and believe it or not- he'll find his smile. Thanks for reviewing. Hugs, SHaria
Title: Chapter 32. Christmas In Tuscany 22 Dec 2010 5:35 am
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed) [Report This]
    lovely Christmas Chapter! I love their time in Italy. Caught some familiar phrases/descriptions from V1 and that made me smile! I like that Sev has such a soft spot for our boy that he would tolerate all that holliday fluff just for Harry!

    Thanks for the update
    V.

    Author's Response: I'm pleased you enjoyed this Christmas chapter Mervoparkite, and their time in Italy.  So do I! Yes, he did tolerate the fluff, and it's been a long journey for Sev to get to this point. I once described this progression (to one of my betas) as the long and winding tightrope. Moving S along this path of emotional awakening and the developing relationship between H and S and trying to accomplish it in a realistic timeline. It's a relief to make it to what feels like a jump off point. Stay tuned for coming attractions! Have a great Christmas! Hugs, SHaria 
Title: Chapter 32. Christmas In Tuscany 21 Dec 2010 9:47 pm
Reviewer: maxthedragon (Signed) [Report This]
    brilliant story im loving it p.s Prego also means your welcome I aska ma mama cant wait for the next chapter :) Happy christmas SHaria

    Author's Response: Hi there Maxthedragon!  I'm happy you are loving the story.  I went back and checked on 'prego' and apparently it can mean all kinds of things, so I just now modified it to read: Ti prego (I beg you). Thanks for keeping me on my toes! Happy Christmas to you too. Hugs, SHaria

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