| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 21 Aug 2022 1:51 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for this superb story! It was, and always is, a great read.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 21 Aug 2022 1:19 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the great chapter! I hope a certain beetle is caught. Thanks for including the scene with Neville.
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 21 Aug 2022 1:04 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Harry’s phrases from the paraphasia are very interesting. I like how supportive Hermione and Ron were, and how Snape is pushing Harry to overcome his teenage tendency towards acedia (great word!) in a very believable way.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Aug 2022 11:40 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Dumbledore’s apology was very nicely done, as was your characterization of a young Harry with older, albeit slightly impaired, mental faculties — a delicate balance that you pulled off splendidly!
| Title: Chapter 10 - No Turning Back
| 20 Aug 2022 4:04 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great finale! I love how the definition of “Dumbledore” was woven in.
Wow, you sure know how to write a riveting chapter.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Aug 2022 11:28 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a typical Ron reaction, though I’m glad that he came around relatively quickly. The evidence of Harry’s comfort and belonging in Snape’s and his home was hard to refute.
| Title: Chapter 8 - Christmas is all around
| 19 Aug 2022 12:55 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love the song references that took me back to those years long ago. Snape was as enjoyably witty as always.
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 19 Aug 2022 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love when Snape has Harry held firmly between his knees, with Harry looking down at him and thus unable to effectively mask his feelings. It’s brilliant. The tree imagery was so striking that it will always stay with me!
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