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Reviews For The Definition of Family
I love how Snape reverts back to calling Harry Elliot at times. And the word Dad seems to roll off Harry's tongue pretty easily. They both need each other so badly. I'm wondering if Snape is still planning on punishing Harry for this latest fiasco, or will he let it slide. Best part of this chapter, besides the Harry/Snape interaction that I always love, was the boggart. Draco dressed up like a witch from the Wizard of Oz is too funny. Great chapter. Thanks for sharing.
I am soooo happy to see this! This chapter was so good. I loved how Harry said he'd never felt guilty about getting in trouble before. That was a nice, little profound moment for him. This story sounds like it'll be as good as your first, if not better. :-) Keep up the nice work! Author's Response: If you pay attention well enough you'll notice all sorts of very subtle and some not so subtle throwbacks to movies and books. ;) A lot of Douglas Adams, but I mash it up depending on my mood. And thanks!
That is all I have to say.
I am so in love with your Severus. He is witty, clever, and so slytherin while still being affectionate and huggy (by his standards)! I'm glad you started a sequel
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