| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 15 Aug 2022 7:59 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for another wonderful chapter! There were some really fun moments in this chapter (Luna’s hat, Snape rooting for the bludgers, the books on shelf in Snape’s quarters). It’s these details that create such a rich story. Thank you!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 07 Nov 2020 3:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love how Severus is manipulating harry
OMG - Luna's lion head at breakfast nearly had me in a fit of laughter!
Excellent chapter. I wanna know what's up with the parading stones, however... Guess I'd better keep reading. ^^
Sorry I haven't been around to review lately. I've been super busy studying and working and have had no time left to read fan fiction. :-(
I liked this chapter. It's interesting to watch how Snape and Harry continue their relationship over the school year. I wonder when Hermione and Ron will be told the whole story... ;-)
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 15 Jun 2010 12:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you fr continuing this I love Elliot
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 13 Jun 2010 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: Phinamin (Anonymous)
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Damn! Why do chapters always end! Lol! Awesome, awesome, awesomeness! You have constructed a story/series where I am always craving the next bit. This time was no exception. I really liked the blank concern of Snape in the infirmary and I'm curious about any addition potentially troublesome allergies! And the toddler walking warning spell was a funny touch! Yay for more!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 13 Jun 2010 4:08 am
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| Reviewer: rd (Anonymous)
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^^ I'm loving this fic (loved your last one too). It's an enjoyable, interesting read. Very well written, lovely mix of dialogue & exposition :)
well done, I can't wait for more ^-^
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 13 Jun 2010 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: love_it (Signed)
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I would be more than happy to boost your ego, since you are a fantastic writer and are worthy of amazing reviews. I'm sure I have said this before, but I absolutely adore your Snape and Harry, and how realistic this could be! I mean, the father-son dynamic is spot on. Teaching Harry about finance and taxes is such a fatherly thing to do, and makes their relationship so much better. I'm excited to see what happens next.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 12 Jun 2010 10:19 pm
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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So glad you are back. I really love the way Snape is with Elliot. And the parenting book, too funny. So glad you are writing a sequel, loved the first one and love this.
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 12 Jun 2010 7:59 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Yay!!! You updated!
Snape is so cute! (Do not tell him that! I don't fancy chopping Shrivelfiggs for detention!) He's using a toddler's monitoring spell on Harry/Elliot.
I can't wait to see what happens when Harry tells Ron and Hermione.
I have a feeling though, that they are going to find out quite by accident.
I love how much at home that Harry feels with Snape now. I wish that their new relationship could be otu in the open.
Nice job as usual. Love this story.
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