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Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 16 Aug 2022 9:47 pm
Reviewer: cavehack (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Harry’s keen observation of dried cockroaches that causes us to reflect on how far he and Snape have come since that incident. Very nicely done chapter.
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 07 Nov 2020 3:51 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Great fun I love six year old harry
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 21 Jul 2015 3:46 am
Reviewer: Pug Mom 10 (Signed) [Report This]
    love the time harry (elliot) spend with his father!!
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 31 Oct 2012 1:12 am
Reviewer: sarahsezlove (Signed) [Report This]
    Hilarious...yet beautifully sad.
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 05 Aug 2010 6:25 am
Reviewer: Dream Painter (Signed) [Report This]
    Awww...! I always love a good glimpse of little Elliot. ^^

    Great chapter - as always!
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 01 Jul 2010 1:59 am
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) [Report This]
    Hahahaha, that was funny and sweet. I always enjoy a bit of little Harry. Hermione doesn't miss much, that's for sure. I'm sure it won't be long before she understands more and Harry will spill.

    This sequel is just as well done as the first story was. I love it. :D
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 26 Jun 2010 8:13 pm
Reviewer: karee (Signed) [Report This]
    Why does harry wear different socks in each foot?
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 19 Jun 2010 1:06 pm
Reviewer: Susana R (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another enjoyable chapter! I love how you are writing Harry as clever yet still in need of affection and guidance, and Snape as caring and parental but still snarky. Always a joy to see you have posted again.
Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 18 Jun 2010 2:14 am
Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just love this story. I'm a little confused about the line"Not all affection need be bargained for, little Slytherin." I think it's just me being silly, but I would really appreciate some clarification. That's not to say you story isn't clear. Look what I've done, messing everything up. Anyway I love the story. Sorry for rambling. Thank you.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the review!  I was referring to this bit:

    However, he'd also been able to give in a little more to some of his more basic desires, and Snape had not once really chastised him for playing exuberantly, laughing at silly things, or needing a hug or two. [...] Snape didn't need to know that Harry looked forward to something like that.

    [...]

    "Alright. But again I'm not fully responsible for how I act."

     

Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams 18 Jun 2010 12:21 am
Reviewer: love_it (Signed) [Report This]
    I really love this! I always look forward to your updates, because each chapter makes me feel warm and fuzzy ;)

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