| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Aug 2022 11:28 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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That was a typical Ron reaction, though I’m glad that he came around relatively quickly. The evidence of Harry’s comfort and belonging in Snape’s and his home was hard to refute.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 07 Nov 2020 4:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Typical Ron you have him down to a T
Ahhh...never a truer word, hmmm?
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 27 Dec 2010 1:39 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awwww loved this and loved Snape he knew that the other two would be worried but also needed prooof and Hermionie's comment
""But Harry needs a family of his own. One where he won't get lost in the shuffle."" that is powerful
Love this chapter - so many great little moments, artfully strung together. And was that foreshadowing I heard from the Trelawney sector? Hmm...
Well done! ^^
That last line from Hermione is just plain awesome. I enjoyed the observation of Harry's room and new life coming from his friends. I liked the part where Harry realized that Snape was receiving his report card from the owl, and then later discovering it on the fridge. Nicely done. I was all happy for him. :D
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 28 Jun 2010 6:03 pm
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| Reviewer: Ciara (Anonymous)
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Very good, I really love this story so far, little Harry is so cute!
I like that you added in some of the Dutch and Russian cultures.
Hope you update soon.
Like Harry, I saw Ron's reaction coming, but I am glad that his eyes were opened to the reality of the situation. Harry had nothing against the Weasleys, if anything he loves them. However, as Hermione said, he needs someone that is there for him, no matter what. Harry would have been lost amongst a sea of Weasleys and with Severus, he has the individual attention he needs.
Dumbledore doesn't know what just hit him, does he? He should have realized that Harry would quickly become far more important to Severus than the destruction of Voldemort. Severus will do whatever it takes to protect his child and their interests. No longer will Dumbledore be allowed to use Harry to further his own goals with impunity.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Jun 2010 5:18 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Very good chapter. I liked the way Ron was convinced.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Jun 2010 4:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Super chapter!
I hope that Dumbledore comes to realize that Snape is now a father and if Snape murder him, it would be very bad both for Elliot and for Severus. If Dumbles want to die, he can drink some poison... I think that Dumbles think only about himself and not others (in the matter of his death).
...So I hope that you will not stick to the original book =o)
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