| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 19 Aug 2022 12:23 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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I love when Snape has Harry held firmly between his knees, with Harry looking down at him and thus unable to effectively mask his feelings. It’s brilliant. The tree imagery was so striking that it will always stay with me!
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 07 Nov 2020 8:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I hoe he gets Christmas thank you
Tree sperm? What a fabulous mental image.
This horcrux thing is a bit creepy and I can see how Harry would be a tad apprehensive about going through with it, though we all know he will.
The onion thing was funny. Ha. :D
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 07 Jul 2010 12:25 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Loved this chapter even though I love the de-age ones best can Harry be de-aged in Holland so he can have a child's Christmas Please!!!
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 06 Jul 2010 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Thanks for the update...can't wait to read more, how long its this story?
Author's Response: I've no idea. Another three or four chapters, I think, with some one shots planned as well. :) Thanks for the review :D
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 05 Jul 2010 7:11 am
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| Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous)
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This chapter felt different, good different. Not that I don't like how the other chapters feel. I want to know more about the Snape flying business I forgot to mention that in my last review. Also thank you for answering my question that one time. As always you blow me away with the story and how well written it is. Thanks!
I do hope that they will be able to get rid of the scar without causing any permanent changes to Harry's persona. It would be terrible if saving him from the horcrux destroyed the wonderful boy that he is. With where the horcrux is it could cause him to have to relearn everything....
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 04 Jul 2010 7:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Phew! Thank goodness, that Harry is alright. That was very scary, and very naughty of you to leave us with a nasty cliffie like that. But, I'll forgive you, since this chappie was brilliant and Harry is safe, and Snape is the protective father. By the way, that was really sweet, how Snape still gave Harry comfort, even though he was furious with him.
Hee hee, Snape is still mean though; making Harry chop onions and chives. Ouch! I can just feel the sting.
I hope that Harry can earn his trip back.
I can't wait for the next chappie.
| Title: Chapter 7 - A Presence of Mind
| 04 Jul 2010 5:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Kazza (Anonymous)
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Another wonderful chapter. Thank you for something so good to read on a wintery evening (I'm not mad, it is winter down here in Australia).
Author's Response: Ah, well. Madness is relative but I hardly think I can judge your sanity based on hemispheres. ;). Glad you're enjoying the fic, and thanks for the review!
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