| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Aug 2022 11:40 am
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Dumbledore’s apology was very nicely done, as was your characterization of a young Harry with older, albeit slightly impaired, mental faculties — a delicate balance that you pulled off splendidly!
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 08 Nov 2020 9:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you I love little Harry
I totally loved baby Harry's insightful comments.
Genius.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 27 Dec 2010 4:51 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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"I wish to apologize to you, Severus." The headmaster said, catching the silence of the other portraits. "I have asked you to sacrifice too many things in this war. Your time, your intelligence, your safety, and your dignity. I had even thought Harry would have to sacrifice himself in the end. As it turned out, and as in many things, I was wrong."
wow that wsa powerful i only wish dumblodore had made this apology in the books as both Harry and Severus were underestimated by dumbldore.
there was so many sweet moments in this
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 12 Aug 2010 1:09 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter I love Harry as a toddler I wish he could stay that way. Thank you so much
Another nicely written chapter. Well done with the paraphasia. I like how certain things, memories in particular, seem to be tied in with the horcrux. Very probable - I love it.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 22 Jul 2010 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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This was such a lovely follow up to the "Voldemort is Dead" chapter. :) I loved the mental images I got of Elliot/Harry as a toddler at Spinner's End, and Severus being such a good father to him.
I'm going to be sad to see this story end, but I love knowing that I can go back and re-read it over and over again.
As always, well done!
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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A lot of happened while I was abroad... You wrote it very well =o) I knew that it isn't the end but I think it will be soon...Will you write a sequel? Perhaps: The Definition of Live?
Have a nice summer!
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 8:23 am
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Oh my god! I was so scare for harry, I loved baby harry, I'm so happy now...can't wait for next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 1:15 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Great chapter. Love the description of little Harry, and the flashes of his older self (wash hair!). Liked the scene in the headmasters office giving Dumbledore a bit of a happy ending.Good end to the chapter too, keeping us guessing.
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