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Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 21 Jul 2010 12:59 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Harry sounds adorable as a toddler. Hee hee! I love how he got mad at Scrimgeour.

    I'm glad that Harry is grown though, and I hope that he retains all his memories, or at least hasn't lost the most important ones. Wanting pizza is a good sign.

    Great chappie as usual
Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 20 Jul 2010 7:29 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Nice chapter. Now to see how much damage has been done to Harry. Thank for the update.
Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 20 Jul 2010 9:35 am
Reviewer: Adah (Signed) [Report This]
    I also have to add that I found this particularly touching because my dad has severe paraphasia from a stroke a couple of years ago, and I just love the way you're dealing with it here.
Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 20 Jul 2010 9:33 am
Reviewer: Adah (Signed) [Report This]
    I *cried* while reading this. I think it was sometime during the letter.
    I love Snape's way of responding to Harry's paraphasia by taking it in stride. It's so parental Snape, I adore it.
    I also am completely impressed by the way you dealt with Harry's horcrux removal, assigning him issues that stroke victims usually have, it's quite clever.
    I think I'm actually going to go through this chapter and read it again, that's how beautiful I thought it was.
    Fantastic.

    Author's Response:

    Aww, I didn't mean to make anyone cry.  But thank you for the lovely note.  :)  The paraphasia is a bit of a challenge to write, but something that I think would be realistic for the circumstances. I will be taking small artistic license with some of the side effects and treatments, but you are correct in your statement that it's similar to a stroke.

    Thank you again for the kind words, and I hope you enjoy the next bits just as much!

Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 20 Jul 2010 8:46 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome! The conversation with Scrimgeour was done very well and so was the talk with Dumbledore. The interactions between Harry and Snape were sweet as usual!

    Will look forward to the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 20 Jul 2010 8:37 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay! love it. And Harry's speech difficulties should prove interesting. :) loved Snape's emotions and thoughts in this. Harry was adorable. The letter was a great addition. Fabulous job!
Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos 20 Jul 2010 6:20 am
Reviewer: Rana (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this Series...Snape is awesome!

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