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Reviews For The Definition of Family
I'm glad that Harry is grown though, and I hope that he retains all his memories, or at least hasn't lost the most important ones. Wanting pizza is a good sign. Great chappie as usual
I love Snape's way of responding to Harry's paraphasia by taking it in stride. It's so parental Snape, I adore it. I also am completely impressed by the way you dealt with Harry's horcrux removal, assigning him issues that stroke victims usually have, it's quite clever. I think I'm actually going to go through this chapter and read it again, that's how beautiful I thought it was. Fantastic. Author's Response: Aww, I didn't mean to make anyone cry. But thank you for the lovely note. :) The paraphasia is a bit of a challenge to write, but something that I think would be realistic for the circumstances. I will be taking small artistic license with some of the side effects and treatments, but you are correct in your statement that it's similar to a stroke. Thank you again for the kind words, and I hope you enjoy the next bits just as much!
Will look forward to the next chapter!
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