| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 21 Aug 2022 1:04 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Harry’s phrases from the paraphasia are very interesting. I like how supportive Hermione and Ron were, and how Snape is pushing Harry to overcome his teenage tendency towards acedia (great word!) in a very believable way.
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 08 Nov 2020 10:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a lovely chapter
Lovely interaction between Harry, Hermione and Ron.
"A Broken Thesaurus"... very apropos title for yet another great chapter. ^^
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 28 Jul 2010 6:13 am
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| Reviewer: Stacey (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Evil beetle is evil. I hope she doesnt cause any trouble.
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Syllva (Signed)
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Hahah maybe Harry was dreaming of his "hufflepuff friend"? I think it would be cute if he got together with him =)
Anway, good chapter! can't wait for the next update
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter and the last. I liked when Snape told him to try again to express a thought. Also counting in Dutch is brilliant. I like how many details you put into the story. When you're done with this I hope you write another. Perhaps that's only wishful thinking on my part but who knows.
wow, that was a looong update. But very very wonderful. I loved the hot sun instead of summer. haha. (on the possible chance I have not reviewed your story, I very much do enjoy it. so thanks.)
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter. I like the fact that Harry did not get out of losing the horcrux scott free, and the word choices you made when writing his paraphasia were very good.
The pensieve scene was a great way to show us the press conference without having to go into it exhaustively, and I loved Severus' commentary about the reporters and other folk at the feast.
Hmmm. Rita Skeeter is at it again.... oh, dear!
Well done! I look forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 8:31 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Great chappie. Poor Harry though. It must be frustrating for him to get his mords wixed.
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