| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 21 Aug 2022 1:19 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Thanks for the great chapter! I hope a certain beetle is caught. Thanks for including the scene with Neville.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 09 Nov 2020 5:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much a lovely chapter I loved the slinkies
Wonderful Neville always puts things into perspective.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 27 Dec 2010 5:26 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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neville is defintly a hidden gem
and awww poor HArry or should i say elliot it is not easy to deal with brain damage
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 12 Aug 2010 7:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter but just when it was supposed to be alright! You are a mean one to your characters!
Loved how Harry got distracted by the babelfish repeating his words. ^^ I felt so sorry for him when he was all frustrated, though.
Oh! Oh! And his patronus! So CUTE!
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 31 Jul 2010 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Liked the scene in the staffroom, and Filch's reaction to the slinkies. Also the scene in the Gryffindor dormitory....and pretty much all of the others too!
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 30 Jul 2010 1:43 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, love Sara; love CSI!
Aw, Dumbles funeral was so sad, but I'm glad that Harry is finally remembering some things.
Neville is such a good, loyal friend.
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. I hope that Harry gets back to normal soon, poor boy.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 29 Jul 2010 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed)
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Oh I love this story. The slinkies are brilliant and I love the emotion and protective feelings that Snape has for Harry. Fantastic!
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 29 Jul 2010 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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I love the interaction between Harry and Neville at the end of this chapter. Snape was horrible to Neville, yet he still supports Harry and wants him to be happy. You're right, Neville is definitely a Gryffindor - I think Neville's reaction here is very much in character. Thanks for another great chapter! Oh, and can Rita Skeeter be *very* publicly humiliated?
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