Great chapter and story! I loved it! The ending scene was so touching and sweet. I also enjoyed that Harry still has brain damage instead of it "magically" disappearing. Great job!
| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 04 Aug 2010 3:05 am
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| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Back to Hogwarts
| 31 Jul 2010 7:20 am
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| Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed)
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I am enjoying this story. I especially like the interaction between Snape and Harry.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 31 Jul 2010 1:12 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Liked the scene in the staffroom, and Filch's reaction to the slinkies. Also the scene in the Gryffindor dormitory....and pretty much all of the others too!
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 30 Jul 2010 1:43 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, love Sara; love CSI!
Aw, Dumbles funeral was so sad, but I'm glad that Harry is finally remembering some things.
Neville is such a good, loyal friend.
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one. I hope that Harry gets back to normal soon, poor boy.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 29 Jul 2010 1:45 am
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| Reviewer: chrmisha (Signed)
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Oh I love this story. The slinkies are brilliant and I love the emotion and protective feelings that Snape has for Harry. Fantastic!
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 29 Jul 2010 1:29 am
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| Reviewer: Severa (Signed)
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I love the interaction between Harry and Neville at the end of this chapter. Snape was horrible to Neville, yet he still supports Harry and wants him to be happy. You're right, Neville is definitely a Gryffindor - I think Neville's reaction here is very much in character. Thanks for another great chapter! Oh, and can Rita Skeeter be *very* publicly humiliated?
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 28 Jul 2010 6:13 am
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| Reviewer: Stacey (Anonymous)
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Great chapter! Evil beetle is evil. I hope she doesnt cause any trouble.
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 11:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Syllva (Signed)
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Hahah maybe Harry was dreaming of his "hufflepuff friend"? I think it would be cute if he got together with him =)
Anway, good chapter! can't wait for the next update
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 10:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Perri (Anonymous)
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Loved this chapter and the last. I liked when Snape told him to try again to express a thought. Also counting in Dutch is brilliant. I like how many details you put into the story. When you're done with this I hope you write another. Perhaps that's only wishful thinking on my part but who knows.
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