wow, that was a looong update. But very very wonderful. I loved the hot sun instead of summer. haha. (on the possible chance I have not reviewed your story, I very much do enjoy it. so thanks.)
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 5:50 pm
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter. I like the fact that Harry did not get out of losing the horcrux scott free, and the word choices you made when writing his paraphasia were very good.
The pensieve scene was a great way to show us the press conference without having to go into it exhaustively, and I loved Severus' commentary about the reporters and other folk at the feast.
Hmmm. Rita Skeeter is at it again.... oh, dear!
Well done! I look forward to the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 12 - A Broken Thesaurus
| 25 Jul 2010 8:31 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Great chappie. Poor Harry though. It must be frustrating for him to get his mords wixed.
Oh dear....I wonder what that Skeeter woman will write in her article? Will she be honest and truthful or will she skew the truth in her usual dramatic fashion?
I know that it is very difficult for a boy Harry's age to open up to anyone about issues that he is having, but I do hope that he will tell Severus of any issues resulting from the removal of the horcrux. If he doesn't say anything, Severus won't be able to help him resolve the issues. It is good that other than word association issues, the loss of certain memories, and his problems with math related subjects he has few obvious problems. It's a miracle that he is able to function at all. I have high hopes that the majority of the problems he does have will fade with time and work. I know that Severus will do whatever he can to help his child succeed!
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 22 Jul 2010 2:31 am
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| Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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This was such a lovely follow up to the "Voldemort is Dead" chapter. :) I loved the mental images I got of Elliot/Harry as a toddler at Spinner's End, and Severus being such a good father to him.
I'm going to be sad to see this story end, but I love knowing that I can go back and re-read it over and over again.
As always, well done!
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 7:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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A lot of happened while I was abroad... You wrote it very well =o) I knew that it isn't the end but I think it will be soon...Will you write a sequel? Perhaps: The Definition of Live?
Have a nice summer!
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 8:23 am
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Oh my god! I was so scare for harry, I loved baby harry, I'm so happy now...can't wait for next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 1:15 am
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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Great chapter. Love the description of little Harry, and the flashes of his older self (wash hair!). Liked the scene in the headmasters office giving Dumbledore a bit of a happy ending.Good end to the chapter too, keeping us guessing.
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 21 Jul 2010 12:59 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, Harry sounds adorable as a toddler. Hee hee! I love how he got mad at Scrimgeour.
I'm glad that Harry is grown though, and I hope that he retains all his memories, or at least hasn't lost the most important ones. Wanting pizza is a good sign.
Great chappie as usual
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 20 Jul 2010 7:29 pm
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| Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed)
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Nice chapter. Now to see how much damage has been done to Harry. Thank for the update.
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