| Title: Chapter 5 - A Weekend in Amsterdam
| 26 Jun 2010 9:50 pm
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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I'm glad that in your story severus won't have to kill the headmaster...I like it alot that harry get to be a kid from time to time, its good for him...I like this story a lot so please update soon.
| Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams
| 26 Jun 2010 8:13 pm
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| Reviewer: karee (Signed)
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Why does harry wear different socks in each foot?
| Title: Chapter 5 - A Weekend in Amsterdam
| 25 Jun 2010 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Super chapter! I love this story =D
I hope that Severus and Minerva will be able to figure out a way to remove the horcrux from Harry's forehead without harming him. I wonder if Harry will ever really trust Dumbledore again now that he knows that the old man planned to have him die?
I hope that the information that Severus is getting on this trip will bear fruit. I hope that they will be able to figure out where the rest of the horcruxes are and soon.
| Title: Chapter 5 - A Weekend in Amsterdam
| 25 Jun 2010 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous)
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Thank you for the world's best story!
| Title: Chapter 5 - A Weekend in Amsterdam
| 25 Jun 2010 5:21 am
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| Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed)
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Nice chapter. Harry has to learn to totally trust Severus. For all I care he can kick Dumbly to the curb! Like the toys for Harry. Thank you for the update I look forward to your next one.
| Title: Chapter 5 - A Weekend in Amsterdam
| 25 Jun 2010 2:59 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, that was so sweet. I loved how Harry knew that Snape was proud of him, even though he's not demonstrative.
I'm glad also that Ron has accepted Harry's relationship with Snape.
Hmmm....I wonder what plan Snape has to save Harry from sacrificing himself.
Glad that you've updated. I love how you capture all the small little homey details. I can just imagine sitting in Snape's kitchen, smelling stew cooking. Well done.
Like Harry, I saw Ron's reaction coming, but I am glad that his eyes were opened to the reality of the situation. Harry had nothing against the Weasleys, if anything he loves them. However, as Hermione said, he needs someone that is there for him, no matter what. Harry would have been lost amongst a sea of Weasleys and with Severus, he has the individual attention he needs.
Dumbledore doesn't know what just hit him, does he? He should have realized that Harry would quickly become far more important to Severus than the destruction of Voldemort. Severus will do whatever it takes to protect his child and their interests. No longer will Dumbledore be allowed to use Harry to further his own goals with impunity.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Jun 2010 5:18 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Very good chapter. I liked the way Ron was convinced.
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 19 Jun 2010 4:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Super chapter!
I hope that Dumbledore comes to realize that Snape is now a father and if Snape murder him, it would be very bad both for Elliot and for Severus. If Dumbles want to die, he can drink some poison... I think that Dumbles think only about himself and not others (in the matter of his death).
...So I hope that you will not stick to the original book =o)
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