| Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams
| 17 Jun 2010 2:17 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, I'm always so happy to see an update from you. Love little Elliot, and Snape is turning into a good "Daddy"! LOL! Don't tell him I said that.
| Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams
| 16 Jun 2010 1:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed)
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very cute, I really those moments when Snape and Elliot get to spend time together. Wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter.
The potion that Severus was testing on Harry made him rather loopy, didn't it? I hope that it will accomplish what Severus is theorizing it will. I wonder why Dumbledore wouldn't let him try it on Harry before?
I feel kind of bad for Draco. He hasn't any real friends and is under a great deal of pressure right now. Between the mechanisms of his parents and Voldemort, he has very few choices available to him. He needs a real friend, one who isn't there because of certain 'connections'. I wonder what would happen if Harry extended his hand in friendship to Draco?
| Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams
| 16 Jun 2010 9:57 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I love it when Elliot is six and with his dad. Great chapter, six year olds answer questions with such honesty, "wand up his nose, McGonagall gets mad". Its a shame adults aren't that honest and open.
I just love this story. Thank you! It so made my bad night go away. haha. :D
| Title: Chapter 3 -Bargins and Bad Dreams
| 16 Jun 2010 6:46 am
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| Reviewer: reven (Anonymous)
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Wow, I am just loving every inch of this story so far. I especially liked Snape's line:"Not all affection need be bargained for, little Slytherin".
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 15 Jun 2010 12:30 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you fr continuing this I love Elliot
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 13 Jun 2010 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: Phinamin (Anonymous)
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Damn! Why do chapters always end! Lol! Awesome, awesome, awesomeness! You have constructed a story/series where I am always craving the next bit. This time was no exception. I really liked the blank concern of Snape in the infirmary and I'm curious about any addition potentially troublesome allergies! And the toddler walking warning spell was a funny touch! Yay for more!
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 13 Jun 2010 4:08 am
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| Reviewer: rd (Anonymous)
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^^ I'm loving this fic (loved your last one too). It's an enjoyable, interesting read. Very well written, lovely mix of dialogue & exposition :)
well done, I can't wait for more ^-^
| Title: Chapter 2 - Everyday Lessons
| 13 Jun 2010 1:06 am
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| Reviewer: love_it (Signed)
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I would be more than happy to boost your ego, since you are a fantastic writer and are worthy of amazing reviews. I'm sure I have said this before, but I absolutely adore your Snape and Harry, and how realistic this could be! I mean, the father-son dynamic is spot on. Teaching Harry about finance and taxes is such a fatherly thing to do, and makes their relationship so much better. I'm excited to see what happens next.
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