| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 27 Dec 2010 5:44 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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wow what a story wow whata series i was rivited from the begginning you know not only to write Harry/ Eliot but also Snape. and also the other character mcgonagall, hermionie, ron especially well done
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 27 Dec 2010 5:26 am
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neville is defintly a hidden gem
and awww poor HArry or should i say elliot it is not easy to deal with brain damage
| Title: Chapter 11 - Not Quite Terrible Twos
| 27 Dec 2010 4:51 am
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"I wish to apologize to you, Severus." The headmaster said, catching the silence of the other portraits. "I have asked you to sacrifice too many things in this war. Your time, your intelligence, your safety, and your dignity. I had even thought Harry would have to sacrifice himself in the end. As it turned out, and as in many things, I was wrong."
wow that wsa powerful i only wish dumblodore had made this apology in the books as both Harry and Severus were underestimated by dumbldore.
there was so many sweet moments in this
| Title: Chapter 10 - No Turning Back
| 27 Dec 2010 4:32 am
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like father like son they both instently went to get draco and the accidental magic not a surprise neither is non verbal
and Dumbldore and bumblebee even in this version Dumbldore helps in a way
| Title: Chapter 4 - Clicking into Place
| 27 Dec 2010 1:39 am
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awwww loved this and loved Snape he knew that the other two would be worried but also needed prooof and Hermionie's comment
""But Harry needs a family of his own. One where he won't get lost in the shuffle."" that is powerful
| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 25 Dec 2010 9:40 am
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| Reviewer: Ankita (Anonymous)
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hey...just finished reading the story...both parts! perfect!!!
its well written...snape and harry have been portrayed just as they should have been...nothing unrealistic about them! I mean i can never see snape as the mushy sorts but you were just right! loved it!!! Not too long..not too short! thats why perfect!
| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 14 Aug 2010 6:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Great story and great ending! Thank you very much!
| Title: Chapter 14 - You're Home Again
| 12 Aug 2010 11:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you so much for a great story and for completing the story to such a good conclusion.
| Title: Chapter 13 - The Stain of Ink
| 12 Aug 2010 7:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Wonderful chapter but just when it was supposed to be alright! You are a mean one to your characters!
I really think that Harry needed a chance to really say goodbye to his parents. A part of him will always wonder what he missed not having them, but at least now he has his father and a good life. I know that he will be happy.
Poor Rita! -snickers- It's about time that someone helped her learn a lesson. She was foolish to think that she would be able to get away with her spying on Harry with Severus around to protect him. I really liked the little curse that Severus came up with as her punishment and let us not forget all the lawsuits that she will be facing.... :D
Great story!
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