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Reviews For A Fair Advantage
HUGE FAN My_patronus_is_a_dinosaur
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. When are you planning on updating? (Hope I don't sound too nosy)
I've really enjoyed this story. I have two handicapped sons and have pondered how children with physical and mental handicaps are handled in the Wizarding World. I like very much how you've developed the relationship between Severus and Harry in this, and your deviations from canon aren't distracting at all, but enhance the tale. Things I'd like to see... hmmmm. Well, depending on how long the story is (is it going to end at the end of First Year, or go into the summer and Second Year?), I think it would be nice to see Severus working with Harry a bit on non-scholastic information about living in the Wizarding World. As you've pointed out in other tales, Although technically, he's a full wizard as both of his parents were magical, he has been culturally deprived, and I think it would be neat to see him experiencing other wizarding culture things besides Quidditch. Art or music concerts or even theatre (professional or amateur), things like that. How about Wizarding fictional novels for entertainment instead of non-fiction books? Maybe Severus gets tired of Harry's scrawl and gets him proper penmanship lessions with the quill... In any case, whether you use my ideas or not, I wanted to be sure that you know that you've got a terrific tale here, and I would dearly love to see it finished. Well done! Author's Response: It will definitely be finished. I never abandon my tales here. I've just been distracted with my other stories and haven't thought on this one for a while. Thanks for the ideas and the review!
KCK-Lumcer
Keep up the great work. Please update soon. SM
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed them! |
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