Oooh I like! I just found this today and am loving it so far, the idea of a stutter for Harry is one that I havent come accross before, I love that Ron and Hermione werent bothered about it and befriended him anyway and also that Severus decided to help him with it too, your Severus is great so far and Harry too, I cant wait to read more :D
Very good! Poor Harry! Can't wait to see what's next!
I've really been enjoying this story! I think it's very original and well written. Update soon :D
Wwo I wonder when Snape will notice the broken rib?
I like your story so far, and I really didn't realised you posted two new chapters. What a surprise! And I have to say I didn't imagine that Harry would meet Severus in this way. Nicely done!
Hey there, good chapter! You are a very great writer, only one thing-you might want to have Snape or someone else heal Harry, as he substained injuries via his lovely uncle. I liked this chapter much!
Author's Response: Have patience. That was coming later on. Thanks for the review!
wow, i love the quick updates. thank you.
So harry will spend christmas at Snape's, wow, lots of time to get to know eachother better. Will snape get harry something for christmas? Or vice versa?
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| 21 Jun 2010 10:17 pm
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Well, the plot thickens...I'm enjoying the story.
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| 21 Jun 2010 10:17 pm
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Well, the plot thickens...I'm enjoying the story.
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| 21 Jun 2010 9:41 pm
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Once again your portrayal of Snape strikes exactly the right tone for me! Great chapter.
One note, I don't think his ribs are broken as you earlier implied *might* be the case, he'd be in a LOT more pain. Sounds like they're bruised, which is painful but not excruciating.
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